Revision Help

For those who are struggling with revision strategies. Perhaps these tools will help:
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/engagement/2/2/65/

https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/690/1/

https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/690/01/

https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/635/01/

https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/574/02/ (It is always best to connect the ideas. Conjunctions fail when the ideas are not related.)