Emily Walters Kahina touati Amit Dhingra Michele Gregory Professor Wanda Sabir English 1A 1-2:50pm 13 March 2013
Thesis Sentences
Thesis: Sep
Although, many people complain that they do not have enough time to do certain activities, GR says in her book THP that, it is not that we don’t have enough time, we just have to plan and make it because time does not change, we have too make the changes.
Thesis: Oct
Since, people do not pay attention to their unconscious mind, GR says in her book THP that “...I realized that using my brain in unfamiliar ways would enhance my experience of the present moment and my awareness of myself” because it is proven that when you pay attention to a subject you tend to think of it more often (244).
Thesis: Nov
Although, many people prefer to hear good news, GR says in her book THP that, “people react more to bad news than to good news” because bad news has more of an impact on our life” (272).
Kira Gillooly Cecilya Alanis Brendan Gaines Julio Zamora Professor Wanda Sabir English 1A 4-5:50pm 13 March 2013 Three Part Thesis Sentences
October: Although enlightenment may not be valid Gretchen Rubin uses meditation to stimulate her mind in new ways, to be more mindful.
November: Even though Gretchen Rubin might not be content, she constantly utilizes her attitude to improve her relationships because she values them.
December: Although perfection may be unattainable Gretchen Rubin has learned to accomplish her resolutions using mental discipline and self control because her life will be happier that way.
Hannah Slicton-Williams English 1A Mon-Thur 9-9:50 March 13 Thesis statements
March: Although Gretchen is working toward accepting her failures and not being afraid to try new things, she finds it hard to "be Gretchen" while doing so.
June: Even though Gretchen Rubin does not consider herself a gift giver, she works to give to the people around her in other ways such as motivated them, giving them advice, and sharing things she learned from her Happiness Project.
February: Gretchen Rubin tries to improve her marriage toward the beginning of her Happiness Project by treating her husband, Jamie, to a "Week of Extreme Nice" and by not expecting praise for everything she does; she does not completely succeed in this however because she ends up being disappointed in the lack of appreciation.
We developed these in class today (9-9:50 a.m.) from essay prompts:
Although one could think GR's HP was a journey into self-absorption, in fact, the opposite is true, because she learn her happiness is connected intrinsically to other's (happiness).
Although people do not believe that money can really buy happiness, GR's research affirms this is actually true, because studies show people earning $100,000 or more stated they were extremely happy (page number).
Miaoping Zhong Amanda Wright Professor Wanda Sabir English 1A 4-5:50 15 March 2013 Three Part Thesis Statement
Thesis June: Although many people take family and friends for granted, in her book THP, GR proves it is those relationships that can lead to a happier life, because it "...made it easier for me to be patient, cheerful, kind, generous, and all other qualities I was trying to cultivate"(163).
Thesis July: Although many people think that money can't buy happiness, In her book THP, GR believes that money can bring happiness depending on how you spend it because "Money, spent wisely, can support happiness goals of strengthening relationships, promoting health, having fun, and all the rest" (173).
Thesis September: Although many people complain that they have boring lives, in her book THP, GR proves pursuing a passion can boost happiness because, "Whatever your passion might be, happiness research predicts that making time for a passion and treating it as a real priority instead of an "extra" to be fitted in at a free moment will bring a tremendous happiness boost" (223).
Princess Espinosa Professor Wanda English 1a 9-9:50am Three Part Thesis Sentences
June: Friendship Although Gretchin Rubin feels she has no time to keep in touch with her close friends, she goes out of her way to make the effort because showing up and remembering birthdays help boost happiness.
April: Lighten up Although it can be difficult to raise children, Gretchin Rubin plans to listen and treasure moments because not only will it boost her happiness, it will strengthen her family.
February: Remember Love Although Gretchin Rubin struggles with bad habits towards her marriage, she works on improving her love for Jamie because in every marriage must provide support and companionship.
Although many people don't practice their religion, Gretchen Rubin argues that strengthening your spirituality is key to achieving happiness because studies show that spiritual people are more mentally and physically healthy, know how to handle stress, have better marriages and live longer.
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I have a Master's Degree from the University of San Francisco in Writing, and an undergraduate degree from Holy Names College in Humanistic Studies. I write a weekly column for a local newspaper, San Francisco Bay View. I also have an Internet Radio Show: Wanda's Picks http://wwww.blogtalkradio.com/wandas-picks
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Emily Walters
Kahina touati
Amit Dhingra
Michele Gregory
Professor Wanda Sabir
English 1A 1-2:50pm
13 March 2013
Thesis Sentences
Thesis: Sep
Although, many people complain that they do not have enough time to do certain activities, GR says in her book THP that, it is not that we don’t have enough time, we just have to plan and make it because time does not change, we have too make the changes.
Thesis: Oct
Since, people do not pay attention to their unconscious mind, GR says in her book THP that “...I realized that using my brain in unfamiliar ways would enhance my experience of the present moment and my awareness of myself” because it is proven that when you pay attention to a subject you tend to think of it more often (244).
Thesis: Nov
Although, many people prefer to hear good news, GR says in her book THP that, “people react more to bad news than to good news” because bad news has more of an impact on our life” (272).
Kira Gillooly
Cecilya Alanis
Brendan Gaines
Julio Zamora
Professor Wanda Sabir
English 1A 4-5:50pm
13 March 2013
Three Part Thesis Sentences
October: Although enlightenment may not be valid Gretchen Rubin uses meditation to stimulate her mind in new ways, to be more mindful.
November: Even though Gretchen Rubin might not be content, she constantly utilizes her attitude to improve her relationships because she values them.
December: Although perfection may be unattainable Gretchen Rubin has learned to accomplish her resolutions using mental discipline and self control because her life will be happier that way.
cecilya alanis
4-5:50
for some reason all my punctuation is not coming up when I post i'm really not sure why.
Hannah Slicton-Williams
English 1A Mon-Thur 9-9:50
March 13
Thesis statements
March:
Although Gretchen is working toward accepting her failures and not being afraid to try new things, she finds it hard to "be Gretchen" while doing so.
June:
Even though Gretchen Rubin does not consider herself a gift giver, she works to give to the people around her in other ways such as motivated them, giving them advice, and sharing things she learned from her Happiness Project.
February:
Gretchen Rubin tries to improve her marriage toward the beginning of her Happiness Project by treating her husband, Jamie, to a "Week of Extreme Nice" and by not expecting praise for everything she does; she does not completely succeed in this however because she ends up being disappointed in the lack of appreciation.
We developed these in class today (9-9:50 a.m.) from essay prompts:
Although one could think GR's HP was a journey into self-absorption, in fact, the opposite is true, because she learn her happiness is connected intrinsically to other's (happiness).
Although people do not believe that money can really buy happiness, GR's research affirms this is actually true, because studies show people earning $100,000 or more stated they were extremely happy (page number).
Miaoping Zhong
Amanda Wright
Professor Wanda Sabir
English 1A 4-5:50
15 March 2013
Three Part Thesis Statement
Thesis June:
Although many people take family and friends for granted, in her book THP, GR proves it is those relationships that can lead to a happier life, because it "...made it easier for me to be patient, cheerful, kind, generous, and all other qualities I was trying to cultivate"(163).
Thesis July:
Although many people think that money can't buy happiness, In her book THP, GR believes that money can bring happiness depending on how you spend it because "Money, spent wisely, can support happiness goals of strengthening relationships, promoting health, having fun, and all the rest" (173).
Thesis September:
Although many people complain that they have boring lives, in her book THP, GR proves pursuing a passion can boost happiness because, "Whatever your passion might be, happiness research predicts that making time for a passion and treating it as a real priority instead of an "extra" to be fitted in at a free moment will bring a tremendous happiness boost" (223).
Princess Espinosa
Professor Wanda
English 1a 9-9:50am
Three Part Thesis Sentences
June: Friendship
Although Gretchin Rubin feels she has no time to keep in touch with her close friends, she goes out of her way to make the effort because showing up and remembering birthdays help boost happiness.
April: Lighten up
Although it can be difficult to raise children, Gretchin Rubin plans to listen and treasure moments because not only will it boost her happiness, it will strengthen her family.
February: Remember Love
Although Gretchin Rubin struggles with bad habits towards her marriage, she works on improving her love for Jamie because in every marriage must provide support and companionship.
Enrique Barboza
Ngoc Hunyh
Harold Pedroso
THP Three Part Thesis Practice
August
Although many people don't practice their religion, Gretchen Rubin argues that strengthening your spirituality is key to achieving happiness because studies show that spiritual people are more mentally and physically healthy, know how to handle stress, have better marriages and live longer.
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