April 22, 2009, we spoke about inductive and deductive arguments (handout for inductive and deductive proof). We also practiced developing thesis sentences using the 3-point thesis guidelines. The topic was Earth Day. Post your thesis sentences here.
See the research paper assignment for the homework assignment due today, April 23.
See the research paper assignment for the homework assignment due today, April 23.
posted by Professor Wanda's Posse at 8:08 AM
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Jennifer Gonzales
English 1A
23 April 2009
Mother "Earth Day" Thesis sentences:
1. Although the earth's atmosphere is slowly dissipating, our government is making ecological changes because of the fear of global warming.
2. Although our earth provides room to dump waste, we still need to reuse and recycle the products we use because our landfills are increasing and becoming more toxic to the earth.
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Cesangary Tzinzun
English1A 9-9:50am
23 April 2009
Topic: Mother Earth on "Earth Day"
Although people have stop worrying about mother earth, some has started projects to preven global warming, because it is a serious issue that can save our lives.
Although mother earth has been around for centuries, its been told its coming to an end, because of humans not taking care of her.
Although their has been alot of ecological changes made to prevent global warming, some countries are still not helping the enviornment, because their government doesn't have enough money to provide this new changes to their country.
Mesha Shavers
English 1A
Professor Sabir
22 April 2009
Topic : Mother Earth
Although Mother Earth is the center of the universe, there is evidence that others live among us, because Scientist believe because of the surrounding planets with beds of water on them, that there is life.
Although Mother Earth is slowly deteriorating, we can stop this slow death by recycling,
riding our bikes to prevent pollution and using battery powered vehicles, because pollution is causing the ozone layer to disappear.
Although Mother Earth is sustaining life, we the inhabitants should help to sustain her as well by using less pollutants and preserving her because she provides us with oxygen and the nutrients we need to live.
Jose Vasquez
4/22/09
English 1A
9-10
“Earth Day” Thesis sentence
1. Although earth is 71% water not all water can be use by humans, global warming, water poising, and chemical radiation is creating water shortage for human consumption.
2. Although mother earth has many rainforests humans have started to destroy them to provide mankind with room to create new cities.
3. Although mother earth has been in orbit for billions of years , its slowly breaking down due to human activity.
Munkhjin Munkhbaatar
English 1A
9-9.50
4-22-09
Earth Day
1.Although people have been living on the Earth for centuries without any fear, now the Mother Earth is in danger because of global warming
2. Although the Earth is approximately 4.7 billion years old and it is still providing life because the Earth shows how much she cares of us.
3. Although the Earth is in danger of global warming, we people should fight against global warming because we people are only smart creatures who could do something about it.
Rebecca Evans eng 1a 9-10 4/23/09 Earth Day thesis sentences
1. Although earth is in peril due to global warming, a thinning ozone, and over population, new technology and individual assets are available to aid the failing earth, because with every small change larger impacts ensue.
2. Although earth has been alive for over 4.6 billion years, recent events in the last few centuries have caused immense destruction, because of human’s industrialization and greed.
3. Although climate temperatures have changes slightly over history, the rapid climate change of the last century is faster than any previous shift because of industrialization and ignorance to earth’s natural patterns.
Andre Stephens
English 1A – 9:00 – 9:50
April 23, 2009
Earth Day 2009 – Mother Earth
1. Even though it is Earth Day and there will be those who will attempt to pollute it in some form or fashion, we must each do our part to improve the environment, because it will not only be beneficial to ourselves but to the entire world.
2. Although Earth Day comes once a year, we should remember how vital the earth is to our well being, because of the resources it provides to us.
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Hong Tang
English 1A 9-10am
Mother Earth - Earth Day Thesis Sentences
1) Although many people are worry about their living conditions on earth they still tend to damage earth by polluting the environment.
2) Although earth is being polluted each and every second fundamental programs are still taking actions to prevent it.
3) Although more and more free spaces on earth are being taken up by non-disposable trash many people are starting to learn the concept of recycling to prevent a mass of waste that will happens to pollute our air.
Nely Ruiz
Professor Sabir
April 22, 2009
English 1 A 9:00 am – 10:00 am
Earth Day Thesis
1. Although earth has been supporting or sustaining life for centuries, it is slowly dying because of global warming.
2. Although the earth has survived through many different ages and is constantly evolving, we must protect it the best way we can, because it is billions of centuries old.
3. Although mother earth is billions of centuries old, it is a flourishing planet, filled with new plant life, because of its perfect proximity to the sun.
Sobczak remains hopeful in her battle against eating, body, and self-esteem issues. With limited government funding Sobczak not only struggles against the media and false interpretations but also with the financial sector. Government funding is allocated to, “For the 10 million suffers of eating disorders only $12,000,000 is allocated toward research and treatment while the 4.5 million suffers of Alzheimer’s receive $647,000,000, and the 2.2 million suffers of Schizophrenia receive $350,000,000.” Neda Eating disorders are the deadliest physiological disease, killing thousands annually. Connie stays motivated by seeing the progress made by the leaders of the Body Positive. Since the start of the Body Positive, fourteen years ago, the first women are now in their late twenties and have gone on to change their communities. Numerous members of the Body Positive have graduated college with psychological degrees, others have gone into holistic healing, and others into community activism. She has changed lives and seen recovery. With her own daughter she perhaps witnessed the most fervent change. While Connie never directly taught or lectured her daughter on body and self love, through osmosis and mirroring positive role models she learned through observation and integration. Sobczak’s daughter mingled with the positive actions and feelings of women around her. Instances of talking against diets, eating when hungry and stopping when full, exercising for friends, fitness and fun, and using one’s time to volunteer, enjoy nature, or educating the mind. Connie Sobczak is continuing her work with the Body Positive by putting out two new movies for adults on body image, expanding the website, and traveling to numerous conferences throughout the United States offering tips and trainings on teaching self love and acceptance. There is hope for self love and in turn love and respect for the earth and all its beings.
1. Although the earth's atmosphere is slowly dissipating, our government is making ecological changes because of the fear of global warming.
2. Although our earth provides room to dump waste, we still need to reuse and recycle the products we use because our landfills are increasing and becoming more toxic to the earth.
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