Today we watched the film: Living on the Fence Line. Visit http://alongthefenceline.com/

You will find profiles for the women here. Bring in your notes. We will practice writing an essay together tomorrow. We will also look at returned essays over the next two days and how to improve them. This will be one-on-one. I will print out copies of your essays with my comments. Do not revise your essays without talking to me first, also, don't feel discouraged. Writing is a process.

This week we will look at revisions in Writing Workshops. We will also look at argumentative writing.

Keep moving through Pid. The lessons learned there will be helpful, especially Subject Verb Agreement.