Unless the three essays were perfect, that is, received passing grades without revision instructions, students have to use the Stewart Pidd template for revision to write an essay about an essay revised: Half the Sky, Book Report, or the Social Entrepreneur essay.

For each essay students were to indicate in a narrative what changed between drafts. The Stewart Pidd treatment is the final essay for SPHE and can be included in the portfolio. It should proceed the final draft.

Remember, the portfolio does not include any new essays except the first two narratives.