January 24, 2011
Dear Students:
I have been away most of the Winter Recess. In fact, just one week ago I was in Dakar, Senegal visiting artists after spending the morning in Rufisque shopping for last minute items before my flight home later that evening. Sunday we caught a bus into Dakar, the number 83, which reminded me of AC Transit bus 82 that travels down what used to be E14th Street, now International Blvd. in Oakland, a line that passes through Oakland and Richmond, El Cerrito and Albany on one end and San Lorenzo and San Leandro in the opposite direction. Similarly the Dakar 83, which also looked like the newer AC Transit buses, just shorter, the upper deck a step up as well, passed through so many cities, I lost count, especially on the way back when every corner was our stop.
For only 275 CFAs, less than a dollar if 400 CFAs is the equivalent, but I was poked by elbows and I had to resist the urge to shove back because one father had his little boy wedged between his legs and then resting against mine, and at one point two women with babies on their backs were shoved into my side. There was not much courtesy in the way of letting mothers with babies sit. In fact, when a seat opened up after we’d been riding for what felt like hours, someone stepping onto the bus took it even after she saw the second mother with child headed for it. So the mother who was getting off first let the second mother have the seat. One woman had three children: one on her lap who was coughing a lot and two next to her. One man’s briefcase kept hitting the boy in his head. I marveled at the kid’s patience until the man finally looked down and moved back a bit. It was as we say a crush.
We thought we’d missed the last bus in at 5:00 or 6:00 PM that evening, so we were happy to see it. I only had 2000 CFAs and some change left by the time we were ready to head back to Rufisque.
I’d been wanting to get to the Artist Village in Dakar for over a month and it was my last day in the country so here we were, my friend Mouhammedou and I. Later Amadou met us. First we stopped by another friend, Suzanne’s home for a visit. She lives near Arafat which is near the stadium, Léopold Sédar Senghor Stadium, the largest stadium in Dakar where the FESMAN or World Festival of Black Art and Culture took place in December. Suzanne hosted me the year before last when I visited Dakar. Since then, her husband died and she wasn’t feeling well. He was an Islamic scholar and all his work was stored in an upstairs library. Her nephew who was living with her and a young woman she had adopted were back with their parents. She was still caring for her mother, but had had to retire from her job as a teacher since her mobility issues connected to her back hadn’t healed.
This was my third visit. I’d gone to see her when I first arrived and later before I went to Mali and now before I left for America. Her sister was there, whom I hadn’t seen in a while, well over a year, and a family friend, I’d never met only spoken to on the phone—he speaks English. We had a nice visit. I really have to learn French and Wolof and Bambara (for Mali). Although, French is spoken in both nations, it is really a language of the elites, so if one wants to talk to the people, she has to speak French. After a few phrases one finds the person one is speaking to often speechless or tongue tied. It is the same in Gambia, where the former colonizer’s tongue, English is supposedly the national language, but everyone speaks Wolof, a choice I applaud. Why give one’s oppressor that kind of leverage or power in one’s governance especially one’s life?
Last year I went to Haiti twice: for Spring Break and during the summer after summer school.
I like traveling in the African Diaspora. I don’t have many plans just a few contacts on the ground –a wish list which is flexible, and after I purchase my tickets I am off. When I went to Haiti the second time I wanted to get to the coast. It didn’t happen. I ran out of time. I also, didn’t have an opportunity to visit with people I’d met before, but next time. In Senegal next time I want to go to Casamance or the southern part of the country and get back to Gambia to say hi to friends. I have to see how I can manage that and still get to Timbuktu for the Festival in the Desert 2012.
I have never been in a desert, so Mali was a challenge. I met a woman in Dakar at a concert from Southern California, who hooked up with me and we traveled to Mali together. I already had my press credentials and added her to my media team. She and I shared a tent together. It was desert boot camp: mattress on dirt, when one swung one’s legs in either direction there was dust and dirt, without the occasional gusts of wind. Tracey and I teamed up at Hotel Des Almadies where she spent the night and then moved with me to the FESMAN Artist Village near N’Gor, a fishing village and island, I have yet to visit. It was also not too far from the Renaissance Monument, where I walked on red carpet, below a spectacular bronze emblem of African unity: father, mother and child.
Yes, it was pretty spectacular. President Abdoulaye Wade, of Senegal, (the country's third president since independence) spoke as did his invited guest, the president of Libya, President Muammar al-Gaddafi. The president of Liberia, President Ellen Johnson-Sirleaf, was there too. Unfortunately, she didn’t speak. I was more than a little excited. Oh, did I mention that I was added to the American delegation the second day of FESMAN, which meant I was a guest of the government, which meant, the Republic of Senegal picked up the tab for my stay, hotel and then Artist Village, accommodations.
Every evening there was a concert or a play or something exciting happening. I had trouble getting around. Wyclef Jean gave several concerts, as did various international hip hop artists from around the globe like Super Natural who was there with his teenage son. Mama Africa was responsible for getting such a large hip hop contingent to FESMAN and almost daily she was taking artists to Goree Island so they could feel the agony and painful energy of the enslaved Africans before they were shipped abroad.
At the Door of No Return, they were flesh and blood witness to the return, not only were African descendents in the Diaspora still here, we were back. President Wade loaned Mama Africa his yacht for one of many visits. He was a great host.
It was a fairytale beginning that shifted, not back to sweeping embers from the fireplace, which might have been nice, since the desert was cold (smile), but gone were the chartered buses and FBI-type assistance once FESMAN ended when we were on our way to Mali, which went without a hitch. I loved flying Kenya Airlines (yes this is a sales pitch).
Okay, at the Bamako airport, we were met by Aissata Ba and Cheikhna Somare, friends of a friend in Chicago. The fairytale was not over yet . . . we still had a few pages to go when we met Mrs. Ba, who lived in the ghetto in a mansion—beautiful mansion. Now, the term ghetto is a loose one. There were just no mansions nearby to match hers, nothing close at all—which is what she wanted. A Fulani, she liked open space.
We spent a day and a half there and then were one our way north to Timbuktu by was of Mopti, a city I might explore on subsequent visits.
Oh, I didn’t mention spending New Years in Saint Louis, the former capital of Senegal. Akan was the headliner that night. I was not impressed and left to walk around the island. Earlier I’d gone to the museum and Tracy and I went on a horse drawn carriage tour of the island. I thought it strange that the Muslims went back to using a bell to announce the prayers instead of the human voice. Strange indeed, when Prophet Muhammad, peace be upon him, specifically enlisted the services of former Ethiopian slave, Bilal ibn Rabah, for that purpose. His voice was so lovely; tears would steam from supplicants’ eyes.
Okay, so once Cheikhna dropped Tracy and I off at the bus station where we waited for close to six hours, but maybe only four for the bus to fill, all the magic had dissipated and we were back to breathing dusty air (smile). While seated in the waiting room—I jest, a bench somewhat out of the direct sun, I made some of my best deals on jewelry and wraps for my turbans I would wear for most of my time in Mali. All that was visible was my eyes. I had the man who sold me the fabric, 500 CFA a meter, to wrap my scarf for me. Folks were so used to the dirt and dust that they didn’t understand the concept—dirty, that dragging the fabric in the dust was a turn off. I bought orange, blue, white, tan, green and yellow. I should have bought black and red. My favorite color was the green. Everyone in Mali knows were you are from based on the wrap—the only folks sporting the turbans are those folks from the north were there is a lot of dust and yes, conflict.
Camels and motorbikes were the chosen mode of transport, oh and 4-wheel drives. I rode motorbike—burned my thigh the first ride and have a mark now where the hot pipe singed it. I was lost when I met Yacouba; my friend Tracy had been looking for a bank and I saw her ride by waving on a motorbike and when I asked the guys seated nearby was she returning and they said they didn’t know, so I decided to walk back to the Festival, how hard could that be, right?
I could find the main street that ran into the Festival, so I kept asking people on the street if I was headed back in the right direction. When Tracy returned she was worried I hadn’t—she’d left word for me to wait. So Yacouba gave me a lift back after taking me on a mini tour of his town Timbuktu. Oh, did I mention he spoke English, really spoke English?
It was helpful.
I loved it in the desert, minus the dust, which I never got used to. I need to visit Joshua Tree in Southern California, which is in the desert and Death Valley of course, just to compare the two.
If asked what I have learned most from traveling, I would have to say faith in the goodness of others and belief in the kindness of strangers. I do not have linguistic access to anything if English is not understood, but I have met really kind passengers on buses who will take my phone and talk to a friend on the other line who can explain to them where it is I am going.
Oh, a phone is a necessary purchase –at least for me, when traveling alone. It was great both Mali and Senegal used the same monetary and phone system. Gambia was a different system. I don’t know about Libya or Guinea, where I want to go next time. While in Saint Louis, Mauritania was just across the border. I met a Peace Corp volunteer and his mother while at one of the interchanges—I am not certain which one. We were on our way from Dogon to Djenné, which is where the largest mud brick or adobe building in the world is built. Now that was phenomenal.
The architecture in Mali is so different from that in Senegal and Gambia, which reminded me somewhat of the architecture in Haiti. If I saw any French colonial representations, it was more the palatial plantation style residences, now hotels and office buildings.
I have been meditating on friendship and what or how one defines friendship. Mouhammedou invited me my last week to a get together with friends he’d know since childhood; they trade off hosting the Friday evening gatherings—where they’d thikr or remember God’s blessings and pray for the community and for the world. Seated in the twilight, the sun traveling south on the horizon, I listened to the harmonies of the baritone and tenor and bass voices, rising and falling. I recognized some of the words from Qur’an others from prayers. It was so lovely, so healing, so refreshing.
Later, Mouhammadou introduced me to his friends and told me that they’d been getting together since youth on Fridays, at first to listen to music and kid around and then as they matured and started families they began to turn inward and look at developing their characters and polishing their souls. The women came with little ones after the lights came on—I think the electricity came back on (a running joke, it’s presence always a pleasant surprise).
The women dressed in finery brought laughter and more chatter and then food arrived on platters—I was so hungry and was so happy I could eat it: chicken and not red meat. We washed our hands and passed around the bread to use as a spoon and dug in. Mame Fatim, dressed so elegantly in a blue tie dyed dressed took Pape Lyle’s teething and vomiting in stride, wiping it up and off her garment. Other mother’s nursed, while one toddler walked the circle of men shaking everyone’s hand as a father played with his young daughter. We walked back to Mouhammadou or Pape’s house to get our computers and then went to the Cyber Café for a few hours to check email. I was just transferring pictured to my portable drive. I couldn’t do that at Pape’s house because the best plug was in his bedroom and I didn’t want to impose; the other had a short and as I said, electricity was iffy—one never knew where it would be shut off and for how long.
In Haiti, my friend Rea solved that problem by having her own generator and also using a combination with solar as well. She captured rain water for her plumbing and then used the gray water for the garden—clearing a woman before and of her times.
So faith and friendship. I don’t believe any of us can do anything alone—I am freefalling because I have faith that I will fall into someone’s open umbrella. Like my friend Yacouba said when asked how much he was going to charge me to take me to the Festival Gate, his kindness to me could be an opportunity, but even if it wasn’t he believed that goodness was its own reward.
I too think goodness is its own reward. Get the book Random Acts of Kindness and practice one a week for the semester and reflect on how it makes you feel. This semester we are looking at Women and Girls. Our assigned book is Half the Sky: a book written by a husband and wife that looks at how with education, health care and economic opportunity, women and girls are escaping the cycle of depravation and despair. There are more women and girls in the world, yet they control the least and it would take so little to address the ills which plague this population if we made it a priority.
I almost got to visit a prison in Mali. I had a two hour visit with a prison warden and saw the compound where the women, some mothers lived. There was a school, an infirmary, a place for the mothers with children zero to four years old, a stand where the women sold crafts they made. Yet, despite the activity, the rehabilitation took place after incarceration. Most of the women probably couldn’t read or write in their language, let alone, French. The prison also housed children. In Mali there was no system in place for orphans over five years old, so the children without guardians or runaways lived in the streets and often committed crimes to get picked up for shelter.
Aissata Ba, my friend, is from Northern Mali and has relocated an entire family to her home to save their girls from early marriage and exploitation. She is sending the children to school, has set the mother up in a micro-business or shop and employs the husband, paying all of them wages. The children are both engaged to be married: five and thirteen years old. The mother was married at thirteen with two miscarriages and her first child at fifteen. At twenty-eight, she said she feels so old. She had an infant tied to her back and another under foot. Aissata, who is also a radio personality, has already spoken to her about birth control pills and her neighbor is ready to take charge of her life with no resistance from her husband.
This is not always the case; however, this woman is lucky, then again, when one leaves the confines of one’s closed community, often one’s mind expands as one’s experiences are broadened. It really is the case often that people don’t do better because they honestly don’t know what their options are.
So we will read Half the Sky and students have the opportunity to choose a book of their own with the theme: friendship. I recommend: The Kite Runner, The Pact and Sula. All three books, one a memoir, the other two novels, look at friendship as a theme. However, if there is a book you like with a similar theme, let me see it before you commit to it. The essay connected to this assignment will probably be the midterm.
In English 201 we are also going to read the play, William Shakespeare’s comedy The Taming of the Shrew. In English 1A, Greek playwright Aristophanes's Lysistrata. There will be a short cyber-assignment attached to it. I like the Barnes and Nobles series of Shakespeare books. I have copies made of Lysistrata which like Shakespeare is published on-line.
Lastly, students will have the opportunity to read a book about a women they admire who exemplifies the qualities of a social entrepreneur, a business woman or a woman who has used her life to better society in some way. The woman has to live in Northern Californian and be alive. This is the final paper.
The book we will start with is Stewart Pidd Hates English, Second Edition, by Gary Politt, Craig Baker. It is a workbook which for English 1A should be a refresher and for English 201 maybe, maybe not. For English 1A I plan to run through Pidd in six weeks, so get the book. For English 201, it depends on student competency. We will finish the book before the first big paper is due, the one on Half the Sky: Turning Oppression into Opportunity for Women Worldwide by Nicholas D. Kristof and Sheryl WuDunn. We will use it to practice paraphrasing and summarizing; citations, that is signal phrases and block quotes, MLA for Works Cited, etc.
I like film and theatre and art galleries and music, so film trips will be proposed; it would be nice to go to a play together and maybe a film or concert. As I said, I am still waking up at 12 midnight ready to go and at 3 PM feeling like retiring. There is an eight hour difference between West Africa and here. Can you imagine leaving Dakar at 1:30 AM, Monday, January 17, 2011, arriving in Virginia at Dulles, at 4:30 AM and then heading for San Francisco at 8:40 AM arriving at 11:30 AM—the same Monday, January 17, 2011?
Time is certainly unreal when so much can happen in 24 hours—
My granddaughter’s birthday was Saturday, January 22. Now eight, she attended the COA childcare while my older daughter, Bilaliyah, went to school here. Bilaliyah is finishing up this semester at Cal State East Bay. We went to Build a Bear where Brianna and a few friends, and her aunt, my younger daughter, TaSin. The kids made a stuffed rabbit, a bear and a dog. On Friday at Bree’s school, Bilaliyah took cupcakes and a bouquet of balloons, one which sang, Happy Birthday. I’d never heard of singing balloons before. Tweetie Bird was cute (smile).
Homework: Getting to Know You Essay (smile)
Your first essay assignment is to look in your life for a woman you admire. In a short essay, 4-8 paragraphs, about 250 to 500 words, tell your audience a little about her, your relationship, that is, how you met, what you admire, and list four qualities or strengths you find inspiring about this woman and how knowing her has changed you for the better.
Be descriptive, we want to see, hear and feel this woman’s spirit. This paper is due January 31, 2011. This essay needs to be typed, 12 pt. font, double spaced, 1-inch margins. Bring in a printed copy of the essay to class to share. Oh, for the creative writers in the class, if you want to personify an inanimate object with female references like the planet earth or your favorite car, you can.
Cyber-Assignment 1
Your very first assignment due the first day is to respond to my letter (smile). Write me a letter this evening telling me about yourself, what you want to share, that is, what strengths you bring to the class and what you’d like to take away from the class and what I can do to help you achieve these goals. Indicate in the subject line the assignment and the course title (English 1A, English 201 A, English 201 B) and day/time. I am teaching two sections of English 1A and right now, one section of English 201 A/B, a combined class, so if students do not indicate who they are I cannot sort by course, time, or class. Thanks! On Mondays and Wednesdays I teach from 8-10 AM and continue from 1 PM to 2:50 PM. I need to sort some things out re: assignments this semester before I can confirm office hours. My schedule is not what I planned last year, and I have to see the dean today to see what can be done with it.
My email address is for English 201: coasabirenglish201@gmail.com
For English 1A: coasabirenglish1A@gmail.com
My office is D216. I just moved there, so I don’t know the office phone number, so call my cell which I will give you today. This is the best way to reach me. If you text me I might not see it (smile). I have a radio show and a column in a newspaper, so I am a working writer. This is not my only gig and so I need everyone to be an adult. I will not nag you about assignments and though I am flexible, within reason and respond to students who visit my office hours and notify me in advance when crisis happen, which they—crisis do happen, especially around the time an assignment is due, there are certain academic standards I will not compromise, so if life gets too complex, drop the course and try again when you have more time in your schedule to read and write.
We have a few long weekends, like President’s Day and then there is Spring Break. There might me a Staff Development Day. I have to check, but the prepared student does not wait to the last minute to start an assignment. I encourage students to have a personal blog for saving assignments on-line, that way if a student loses the paper copy or the travel drive, it’s not lost. Also, make a practice of emailing assignments, even in draft form to oneself.
Reading and writing are time consuming and students really can’t fake their way through the process. I am very very good at what I do, just put my name in a search engine and read about me. I can help those who are committed to improve their writing and critical thinking skills. Some students come to English 201 and English 1A underprepared. This is only a problem when said students refuse to put the extra effort into the class needed to bring their skill level up. I cannot write student papers for students. I wrote this seven page letter without notes in two hours and could have gone one for longer. I love academic engagement. I love talking to people who have prepared themselves by doing their research and have formulated ideas on a topic we are about to discuss. I am not easily bored or discouraged, but the success of the class depends on the kind of students we have in the course. Last semester, students in more than one class didn’t read the books and so in class we were limited in our discussions. In one class I dropped all the English 201B students.
Students who come to class late without their readings and homework are headed for failure. I hope everyone seated here is serious and plans to be around in May for that A or B or C or CR (edit). Some students are starting their college careers this semester, others need this course to graduate (smile).
Again, if you need a drill sergeant, I am not the one. I don’t lock doors. I am pleasant. I don’t yell or scream. I treat my students as adults and expect them to handle their business and be in class on time and alert and prepared each meeting. I expect students to communicate with me in advance if there is any problem re: assignment due dates. I expect students to not make excuses for themselves, rather be responsible, get their children to school before class time, to make appointments outside class time, to eat breakfast before class, lunch after class.
I am not easy, but I am good and you will learn how to write better than you do presently. For students who were in Honors English in high school, you don’t have to take English 201 and I think you can challenge English 1A; check this with you counselor. For former students, you might find the journey through Stewart Pidd again boring, I am perfectly fine if you drop this class for another. I found last semester that students in all my classes who didn’t do a Pidd refresher, had problems with simple essay structure and of course with the grammar associated with this.
What else? I am time challenged, so if I can be at the college early then you can be on time too. I encourage students to take advantage of college life, clubs and certainly support services such as the academic labs: Writing, ESL, Math, and Accounting—all located in the LRC or Learning Resource Center, the “L” building. The library is on the first floor. If this is your first semester take College Success, a three unit course.
Audio books are also an option. You can put the book in a listening device and listen to it as you work, so don’t overlook this option—you also need a physical copy for in-class discussions. I am talking about the three books on friendship. I don’t know how one takes notes or annotates when you listen to a book, but I’ll leave that for you to work out.
Good Luck and don’t forget to visit my office hour at least three times this semester: the first month, before or just after midterm and then week 16-17 before finals. More on office hours in the syllabus. We don’t have a sitting final. Student finals are an electronic portfolio. Visit http://professorsabirsposse.blogspot.com (English 201) and http://professorwandasposse.blogspot.com (English 1A).
I will post notes from class lectures and homework there. This letter is posted there already and the syllabus. The assignment for the syllabus is to be posted there. We will meet once a week in an electronic classroom. We will also have a visit to the library for an orientation in February.
I like themes and so we will have an assignment and presentation on love to tie into Valentine’s Day and something on the anniversary of the War in Iraq and Afghanistan in March, not to mention International Women’s Day. There will be college activities next month, February, each Tuesday from 12 noon to 1 PM. If students attend they can have credit for that attendance if they write a short, 250 word response about the event. It is the College of Alameda’s 40th Anniversary year, so there will probably be many special events. If any student goes to any event at the college, said student will get class credit for attending if he or she writes something and turns it in. Email is fine, after a face to face discussion. Keep track of your extra credit assignments.
Textbook Recap:
Pollitt, Gary. Craig Baker. Stewart Pidd Hates English: Grammar, Punctuation, and Writing Exercises. Second Edition. California: Attack the Text Publishing, 2008. ISBN: 13: 978-0-9755923-4-2
Kristof, Nicholas D., and Sheryl WuDunn. Half the Sky: Turning Oppression into Opportunity for Women Worldwide. New York: Alfred A. Knopf, 2009.
I’ll have the bookstore get copies of The Pact by Drs. Sampson Davis, George Jenkins, and Rameck Hunt with Lisa Frazier Page, Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini, and Sula by Toni Morrison, after we do a count and see who might want to read these selections. All the books are in the public library, perhaps even Peralta sister colleges, if not COA, Laney, Berkeley City or Merritt. If money is an issue use the public and institutional lending libraries for the books. Do not wait to the last minute to get the books. Several copies of Pidd are on reserve at the College of Alameda library. The book doesn’t circulate but there are about five copies on reserve.
Students need to choose a book by a woman author or about a woman, who lives here in the San Francisco Bay Area. Biographies and autobiographies are great. If you want to read a novel, let me see it first. Students will have a paper and a presentation based on the book. Choose one now and when we finish Half the Sky you can start reading it. The presentation and paper will be due in April.
I will give students more detailed essay assignments for each of the four essays: Half the Sky, Friendship or midterm, student selection, social entrepreneur.
Students also need a dictionary. I recommend: The American Heritage Dictionary. Fourth Edition.
Peace and Blessings,
Ms. Wanda Sabir, English Professor,
College of Alameda, Spring 2011
Dear Students:
I have been away most of the Winter Recess. In fact, just one week ago I was in Dakar, Senegal visiting artists after spending the morning in Rufisque shopping for last minute items before my flight home later that evening. Sunday we caught a bus into Dakar, the number 83, which reminded me of AC Transit bus 82 that travels down what used to be E14th Street, now International Blvd. in Oakland, a line that passes through Oakland and Richmond, El Cerrito and Albany on one end and San Lorenzo and San Leandro in the opposite direction. Similarly the Dakar 83, which also looked like the newer AC Transit buses, just shorter, the upper deck a step up as well, passed through so many cities, I lost count, especially on the way back when every corner was our stop.
For only 275 CFAs, less than a dollar if 400 CFAs is the equivalent, but I was poked by elbows and I had to resist the urge to shove back because one father had his little boy wedged between his legs and then resting against mine, and at one point two women with babies on their backs were shoved into my side. There was not much courtesy in the way of letting mothers with babies sit. In fact, when a seat opened up after we’d been riding for what felt like hours, someone stepping onto the bus took it even after she saw the second mother with child headed for it. So the mother who was getting off first let the second mother have the seat. One woman had three children: one on her lap who was coughing a lot and two next to her. One man’s briefcase kept hitting the boy in his head. I marveled at the kid’s patience until the man finally looked down and moved back a bit. It was as we say a crush.
We thought we’d missed the last bus in at 5:00 or 6:00 PM that evening, so we were happy to see it. I only had 2000 CFAs and some change left by the time we were ready to head back to Rufisque.
I’d been wanting to get to the Artist Village in Dakar for over a month and it was my last day in the country so here we were, my friend Mouhammedou and I. Later Amadou met us. First we stopped by another friend, Suzanne’s home for a visit. She lives near Arafat which is near the stadium, Léopold Sédar Senghor Stadium, the largest stadium in Dakar where the FESMAN or World Festival of Black Art and Culture took place in December. Suzanne hosted me the year before last when I visited Dakar. Since then, her husband died and she wasn’t feeling well. He was an Islamic scholar and all his work was stored in an upstairs library. Her nephew who was living with her and a young woman she had adopted were back with their parents. She was still caring for her mother, but had had to retire from her job as a teacher since her mobility issues connected to her back hadn’t healed.
This was my third visit. I’d gone to see her when I first arrived and later before I went to Mali and now before I left for America. Her sister was there, whom I hadn’t seen in a while, well over a year, and a family friend, I’d never met only spoken to on the phone—he speaks English. We had a nice visit. I really have to learn French and Wolof and Bambara (for Mali). Although, French is spoken in both nations, it is really a language of the elites, so if one wants to talk to the people, she has to speak French. After a few phrases one finds the person one is speaking to often speechless or tongue tied. It is the same in Gambia, where the former colonizer’s tongue, English is supposedly the national language, but everyone speaks Wolof, a choice I applaud. Why give one’s oppressor that kind of leverage or power in one’s governance especially one’s life?
Last year I went to Haiti twice: for Spring Break and during the summer after summer school.
I like traveling in the African Diaspora. I don’t have many plans just a few contacts on the ground –a wish list which is flexible, and after I purchase my tickets I am off. When I went to Haiti the second time I wanted to get to the coast. It didn’t happen. I ran out of time. I also, didn’t have an opportunity to visit with people I’d met before, but next time. In Senegal next time I want to go to Casamance or the southern part of the country and get back to Gambia to say hi to friends. I have to see how I can manage that and still get to Timbuktu for the Festival in the Desert 2012.
I have never been in a desert, so Mali was a challenge. I met a woman in Dakar at a concert from Southern California, who hooked up with me and we traveled to Mali together. I already had my press credentials and added her to my media team. She and I shared a tent together. It was desert boot camp: mattress on dirt, when one swung one’s legs in either direction there was dust and dirt, without the occasional gusts of wind. Tracey and I teamed up at Hotel Des Almadies where she spent the night and then moved with me to the FESMAN Artist Village near N’Gor, a fishing village and island, I have yet to visit. It was also not too far from the Renaissance Monument, where I walked on red carpet, below a spectacular bronze emblem of African unity: father, mother and child.
Yes, it was pretty spectacular. President Abdoulaye Wade, of Senegal, (the country's third president since independence) spoke as did his invited guest, the president of Libya, President Muammar al-Gaddafi. The president of Liberia, President Ellen Johnson-Sirleaf, was there too. Unfortunately, she didn’t speak. I was more than a little excited. Oh, did I mention that I was added to the American delegation the second day of FESMAN, which meant I was a guest of the government, which meant, the Republic of Senegal picked up the tab for my stay, hotel and then Artist Village, accommodations.
Every evening there was a concert or a play or something exciting happening. I had trouble getting around. Wyclef Jean gave several concerts, as did various international hip hop artists from around the globe like Super Natural who was there with his teenage son. Mama Africa was responsible for getting such a large hip hop contingent to FESMAN and almost daily she was taking artists to Goree Island so they could feel the agony and painful energy of the enslaved Africans before they were shipped abroad.
At the Door of No Return, they were flesh and blood witness to the return, not only were African descendents in the Diaspora still here, we were back. President Wade loaned Mama Africa his yacht for one of many visits. He was a great host.
It was a fairytale beginning that shifted, not back to sweeping embers from the fireplace, which might have been nice, since the desert was cold (smile), but gone were the chartered buses and FBI-type assistance once FESMAN ended when we were on our way to Mali, which went without a hitch. I loved flying Kenya Airlines (yes this is a sales pitch).
Okay, at the Bamako airport, we were met by Aissata Ba and Cheikhna Somare, friends of a friend in Chicago. The fairytale was not over yet . . . we still had a few pages to go when we met Mrs. Ba, who lived in the ghetto in a mansion—beautiful mansion. Now, the term ghetto is a loose one. There were just no mansions nearby to match hers, nothing close at all—which is what she wanted. A Fulani, she liked open space.
We spent a day and a half there and then were one our way north to Timbuktu by was of Mopti, a city I might explore on subsequent visits.
Oh, I didn’t mention spending New Years in Saint Louis, the former capital of Senegal. Akan was the headliner that night. I was not impressed and left to walk around the island. Earlier I’d gone to the museum and Tracy and I went on a horse drawn carriage tour of the island. I thought it strange that the Muslims went back to using a bell to announce the prayers instead of the human voice. Strange indeed, when Prophet Muhammad, peace be upon him, specifically enlisted the services of former Ethiopian slave, Bilal ibn Rabah, for that purpose. His voice was so lovely; tears would steam from supplicants’ eyes.
Okay, so once Cheikhna dropped Tracy and I off at the bus station where we waited for close to six hours, but maybe only four for the bus to fill, all the magic had dissipated and we were back to breathing dusty air (smile). While seated in the waiting room—I jest, a bench somewhat out of the direct sun, I made some of my best deals on jewelry and wraps for my turbans I would wear for most of my time in Mali. All that was visible was my eyes. I had the man who sold me the fabric, 500 CFA a meter, to wrap my scarf for me. Folks were so used to the dirt and dust that they didn’t understand the concept—dirty, that dragging the fabric in the dust was a turn off. I bought orange, blue, white, tan, green and yellow. I should have bought black and red. My favorite color was the green. Everyone in Mali knows were you are from based on the wrap—the only folks sporting the turbans are those folks from the north were there is a lot of dust and yes, conflict.
Camels and motorbikes were the chosen mode of transport, oh and 4-wheel drives. I rode motorbike—burned my thigh the first ride and have a mark now where the hot pipe singed it. I was lost when I met Yacouba; my friend Tracy had been looking for a bank and I saw her ride by waving on a motorbike and when I asked the guys seated nearby was she returning and they said they didn’t know, so I decided to walk back to the Festival, how hard could that be, right?
I could find the main street that ran into the Festival, so I kept asking people on the street if I was headed back in the right direction. When Tracy returned she was worried I hadn’t—she’d left word for me to wait. So Yacouba gave me a lift back after taking me on a mini tour of his town Timbuktu. Oh, did I mention he spoke English, really spoke English?
It was helpful.
I loved it in the desert, minus the dust, which I never got used to. I need to visit Joshua Tree in Southern California, which is in the desert and Death Valley of course, just to compare the two.
If asked what I have learned most from traveling, I would have to say faith in the goodness of others and belief in the kindness of strangers. I do not have linguistic access to anything if English is not understood, but I have met really kind passengers on buses who will take my phone and talk to a friend on the other line who can explain to them where it is I am going.
Oh, a phone is a necessary purchase –at least for me, when traveling alone. It was great both Mali and Senegal used the same monetary and phone system. Gambia was a different system. I don’t know about Libya or Guinea, where I want to go next time. While in Saint Louis, Mauritania was just across the border. I met a Peace Corp volunteer and his mother while at one of the interchanges—I am not certain which one. We were on our way from Dogon to Djenné, which is where the largest mud brick or adobe building in the world is built. Now that was phenomenal.
The architecture in Mali is so different from that in Senegal and Gambia, which reminded me somewhat of the architecture in Haiti. If I saw any French colonial representations, it was more the palatial plantation style residences, now hotels and office buildings.
I have been meditating on friendship and what or how one defines friendship. Mouhammedou invited me my last week to a get together with friends he’d know since childhood; they trade off hosting the Friday evening gatherings—where they’d thikr or remember God’s blessings and pray for the community and for the world. Seated in the twilight, the sun traveling south on the horizon, I listened to the harmonies of the baritone and tenor and bass voices, rising and falling. I recognized some of the words from Qur’an others from prayers. It was so lovely, so healing, so refreshing.
Later, Mouhammadou introduced me to his friends and told me that they’d been getting together since youth on Fridays, at first to listen to music and kid around and then as they matured and started families they began to turn inward and look at developing their characters and polishing their souls. The women came with little ones after the lights came on—I think the electricity came back on (a running joke, it’s presence always a pleasant surprise).
The women dressed in finery brought laughter and more chatter and then food arrived on platters—I was so hungry and was so happy I could eat it: chicken and not red meat. We washed our hands and passed around the bread to use as a spoon and dug in. Mame Fatim, dressed so elegantly in a blue tie dyed dressed took Pape Lyle’s teething and vomiting in stride, wiping it up and off her garment. Other mother’s nursed, while one toddler walked the circle of men shaking everyone’s hand as a father played with his young daughter. We walked back to Mouhammadou or Pape’s house to get our computers and then went to the Cyber Café for a few hours to check email. I was just transferring pictured to my portable drive. I couldn’t do that at Pape’s house because the best plug was in his bedroom and I didn’t want to impose; the other had a short and as I said, electricity was iffy—one never knew where it would be shut off and for how long.
In Haiti, my friend Rea solved that problem by having her own generator and also using a combination with solar as well. She captured rain water for her plumbing and then used the gray water for the garden—clearing a woman before and of her times.
So faith and friendship. I don’t believe any of us can do anything alone—I am freefalling because I have faith that I will fall into someone’s open umbrella. Like my friend Yacouba said when asked how much he was going to charge me to take me to the Festival Gate, his kindness to me could be an opportunity, but even if it wasn’t he believed that goodness was its own reward.
I too think goodness is its own reward. Get the book Random Acts of Kindness and practice one a week for the semester and reflect on how it makes you feel. This semester we are looking at Women and Girls. Our assigned book is Half the Sky: a book written by a husband and wife that looks at how with education, health care and economic opportunity, women and girls are escaping the cycle of depravation and despair. There are more women and girls in the world, yet they control the least and it would take so little to address the ills which plague this population if we made it a priority.
I almost got to visit a prison in Mali. I had a two hour visit with a prison warden and saw the compound where the women, some mothers lived. There was a school, an infirmary, a place for the mothers with children zero to four years old, a stand where the women sold crafts they made. Yet, despite the activity, the rehabilitation took place after incarceration. Most of the women probably couldn’t read or write in their language, let alone, French. The prison also housed children. In Mali there was no system in place for orphans over five years old, so the children without guardians or runaways lived in the streets and often committed crimes to get picked up for shelter.
Aissata Ba, my friend, is from Northern Mali and has relocated an entire family to her home to save their girls from early marriage and exploitation. She is sending the children to school, has set the mother up in a micro-business or shop and employs the husband, paying all of them wages. The children are both engaged to be married: five and thirteen years old. The mother was married at thirteen with two miscarriages and her first child at fifteen. At twenty-eight, she said she feels so old. She had an infant tied to her back and another under foot. Aissata, who is also a radio personality, has already spoken to her about birth control pills and her neighbor is ready to take charge of her life with no resistance from her husband.
This is not always the case; however, this woman is lucky, then again, when one leaves the confines of one’s closed community, often one’s mind expands as one’s experiences are broadened. It really is the case often that people don’t do better because they honestly don’t know what their options are.
So we will read Half the Sky and students have the opportunity to choose a book of their own with the theme: friendship. I recommend: The Kite Runner, The Pact and Sula. All three books, one a memoir, the other two novels, look at friendship as a theme. However, if there is a book you like with a similar theme, let me see it before you commit to it. The essay connected to this assignment will probably be the midterm.
In English 201 we are also going to read the play, William Shakespeare’s comedy The Taming of the Shrew. In English 1A, Greek playwright Aristophanes's Lysistrata. There will be a short cyber-assignment attached to it. I like the Barnes and Nobles series of Shakespeare books. I have copies made of Lysistrata which like Shakespeare is published on-line.
Lastly, students will have the opportunity to read a book about a women they admire who exemplifies the qualities of a social entrepreneur, a business woman or a woman who has used her life to better society in some way. The woman has to live in Northern Californian and be alive. This is the final paper.
The book we will start with is Stewart Pidd Hates English, Second Edition, by Gary Politt, Craig Baker. It is a workbook which for English 1A should be a refresher and for English 201 maybe, maybe not. For English 1A I plan to run through Pidd in six weeks, so get the book. For English 201, it depends on student competency. We will finish the book before the first big paper is due, the one on Half the Sky: Turning Oppression into Opportunity for Women Worldwide by Nicholas D. Kristof and Sheryl WuDunn. We will use it to practice paraphrasing and summarizing; citations, that is signal phrases and block quotes, MLA for Works Cited, etc.
I like film and theatre and art galleries and music, so film trips will be proposed; it would be nice to go to a play together and maybe a film or concert. As I said, I am still waking up at 12 midnight ready to go and at 3 PM feeling like retiring. There is an eight hour difference between West Africa and here. Can you imagine leaving Dakar at 1:30 AM, Monday, January 17, 2011, arriving in Virginia at Dulles, at 4:30 AM and then heading for San Francisco at 8:40 AM arriving at 11:30 AM—the same Monday, January 17, 2011?
Time is certainly unreal when so much can happen in 24 hours—
My granddaughter’s birthday was Saturday, January 22. Now eight, she attended the COA childcare while my older daughter, Bilaliyah, went to school here. Bilaliyah is finishing up this semester at Cal State East Bay. We went to Build a Bear where Brianna and a few friends, and her aunt, my younger daughter, TaSin. The kids made a stuffed rabbit, a bear and a dog. On Friday at Bree’s school, Bilaliyah took cupcakes and a bouquet of balloons, one which sang, Happy Birthday. I’d never heard of singing balloons before. Tweetie Bird was cute (smile).
Homework: Getting to Know You Essay (smile)
Your first essay assignment is to look in your life for a woman you admire. In a short essay, 4-8 paragraphs, about 250 to 500 words, tell your audience a little about her, your relationship, that is, how you met, what you admire, and list four qualities or strengths you find inspiring about this woman and how knowing her has changed you for the better.
Be descriptive, we want to see, hear and feel this woman’s spirit. This paper is due January 31, 2011. This essay needs to be typed, 12 pt. font, double spaced, 1-inch margins. Bring in a printed copy of the essay to class to share. Oh, for the creative writers in the class, if you want to personify an inanimate object with female references like the planet earth or your favorite car, you can.
Cyber-Assignment 1
Your very first assignment due the first day is to respond to my letter (smile). Write me a letter this evening telling me about yourself, what you want to share, that is, what strengths you bring to the class and what you’d like to take away from the class and what I can do to help you achieve these goals. Indicate in the subject line the assignment and the course title (English 1A, English 201 A, English 201 B) and day/time. I am teaching two sections of English 1A and right now, one section of English 201 A/B, a combined class, so if students do not indicate who they are I cannot sort by course, time, or class. Thanks! On Mondays and Wednesdays I teach from 8-10 AM and continue from 1 PM to 2:50 PM. I need to sort some things out re: assignments this semester before I can confirm office hours. My schedule is not what I planned last year, and I have to see the dean today to see what can be done with it.
My email address is for English 201: coasabirenglish201@gmail.com
For English 1A: coasabirenglish1A@gmail.com
My office is D216. I just moved there, so I don’t know the office phone number, so call my cell which I will give you today. This is the best way to reach me. If you text me I might not see it (smile). I have a radio show and a column in a newspaper, so I am a working writer. This is not my only gig and so I need everyone to be an adult. I will not nag you about assignments and though I am flexible, within reason and respond to students who visit my office hours and notify me in advance when crisis happen, which they—crisis do happen, especially around the time an assignment is due, there are certain academic standards I will not compromise, so if life gets too complex, drop the course and try again when you have more time in your schedule to read and write.
We have a few long weekends, like President’s Day and then there is Spring Break. There might me a Staff Development Day. I have to check, but the prepared student does not wait to the last minute to start an assignment. I encourage students to have a personal blog for saving assignments on-line, that way if a student loses the paper copy or the travel drive, it’s not lost. Also, make a practice of emailing assignments, even in draft form to oneself.
Reading and writing are time consuming and students really can’t fake their way through the process. I am very very good at what I do, just put my name in a search engine and read about me. I can help those who are committed to improve their writing and critical thinking skills. Some students come to English 201 and English 1A underprepared. This is only a problem when said students refuse to put the extra effort into the class needed to bring their skill level up. I cannot write student papers for students. I wrote this seven page letter without notes in two hours and could have gone one for longer. I love academic engagement. I love talking to people who have prepared themselves by doing their research and have formulated ideas on a topic we are about to discuss. I am not easily bored or discouraged, but the success of the class depends on the kind of students we have in the course. Last semester, students in more than one class didn’t read the books and so in class we were limited in our discussions. In one class I dropped all the English 201B students.
Students who come to class late without their readings and homework are headed for failure. I hope everyone seated here is serious and plans to be around in May for that A or B or C or CR (edit). Some students are starting their college careers this semester, others need this course to graduate (smile).
Again, if you need a drill sergeant, I am not the one. I don’t lock doors. I am pleasant. I don’t yell or scream. I treat my students as adults and expect them to handle their business and be in class on time and alert and prepared each meeting. I expect students to communicate with me in advance if there is any problem re: assignment due dates. I expect students to not make excuses for themselves, rather be responsible, get their children to school before class time, to make appointments outside class time, to eat breakfast before class, lunch after class.
I am not easy, but I am good and you will learn how to write better than you do presently. For students who were in Honors English in high school, you don’t have to take English 201 and I think you can challenge English 1A; check this with you counselor. For former students, you might find the journey through Stewart Pidd again boring, I am perfectly fine if you drop this class for another. I found last semester that students in all my classes who didn’t do a Pidd refresher, had problems with simple essay structure and of course with the grammar associated with this.
What else? I am time challenged, so if I can be at the college early then you can be on time too. I encourage students to take advantage of college life, clubs and certainly support services such as the academic labs: Writing, ESL, Math, and Accounting—all located in the LRC or Learning Resource Center, the “L” building. The library is on the first floor. If this is your first semester take College Success, a three unit course.
Audio books are also an option. You can put the book in a listening device and listen to it as you work, so don’t overlook this option—you also need a physical copy for in-class discussions. I am talking about the three books on friendship. I don’t know how one takes notes or annotates when you listen to a book, but I’ll leave that for you to work out.
Good Luck and don’t forget to visit my office hour at least three times this semester: the first month, before or just after midterm and then week 16-17 before finals. More on office hours in the syllabus. We don’t have a sitting final. Student finals are an electronic portfolio. Visit http://professorsabirsposse.blogspot.com (English 201) and http://professorwandasposse.blogspot.com (English 1A).
I will post notes from class lectures and homework there. This letter is posted there already and the syllabus. The assignment for the syllabus is to be posted there. We will meet once a week in an electronic classroom. We will also have a visit to the library for an orientation in February.
I like themes and so we will have an assignment and presentation on love to tie into Valentine’s Day and something on the anniversary of the War in Iraq and Afghanistan in March, not to mention International Women’s Day. There will be college activities next month, February, each Tuesday from 12 noon to 1 PM. If students attend they can have credit for that attendance if they write a short, 250 word response about the event. It is the College of Alameda’s 40th Anniversary year, so there will probably be many special events. If any student goes to any event at the college, said student will get class credit for attending if he or she writes something and turns it in. Email is fine, after a face to face discussion. Keep track of your extra credit assignments.
Textbook Recap:
Pollitt, Gary. Craig Baker. Stewart Pidd Hates English: Grammar, Punctuation, and Writing Exercises. Second Edition. California: Attack the Text Publishing, 2008. ISBN: 13: 978-0-9755923-4-2
Kristof, Nicholas D., and Sheryl WuDunn. Half the Sky: Turning Oppression into Opportunity for Women Worldwide. New York: Alfred A. Knopf, 2009.
I’ll have the bookstore get copies of The Pact by Drs. Sampson Davis, George Jenkins, and Rameck Hunt with Lisa Frazier Page, Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini, and Sula by Toni Morrison, after we do a count and see who might want to read these selections. All the books are in the public library, perhaps even Peralta sister colleges, if not COA, Laney, Berkeley City or Merritt. If money is an issue use the public and institutional lending libraries for the books. Do not wait to the last minute to get the books. Several copies of Pidd are on reserve at the College of Alameda library. The book doesn’t circulate but there are about five copies on reserve.
Students need to choose a book by a woman author or about a woman, who lives here in the San Francisco Bay Area. Biographies and autobiographies are great. If you want to read a novel, let me see it first. Students will have a paper and a presentation based on the book. Choose one now and when we finish Half the Sky you can start reading it. The presentation and paper will be due in April.
I will give students more detailed essay assignments for each of the four essays: Half the Sky, Friendship or midterm, student selection, social entrepreneur.
Students also need a dictionary. I recommend: The American Heritage Dictionary. Fourth Edition.
Peace and Blessings,
Ms. Wanda Sabir, English Professor,
College of Alameda, Spring 2011
37 Comments:
Dehmi Moore
English 1A Mon-Thurs,9:00-9:50
So I hope that I am doing this assingment correctly,seeing as how I was late for class today and I'm horrible at following directions (smile)
Response to letter:I find it very interesting and fascinating that you travel the world and have encountered so many wonderful and inspiring people,I could only imagine the compassion that this experience has put on your heart. I am guessing that this has alot to do with the material that you are teaching this semester?
I think this semester with you will be very intriguing and informational,I look forward to expanding my english skills with you and my fellow classmates!
*syllabus response
I am a great debator and eager to learn, I would like to think that those are great skills of an English student. I would love to learn how to communicate more with others and present essays in front of the class. I am determind this semester so regardless of any childcare,finicial, or personal siisues I will rise above it all and complete this course with an A+++++
David Guzman
Professor Sabir
English 1A - 9am
24 January, 2011
I found your reflections about this trip to Africa very interesting. The bus situation reminded me of traveling by public bus, which is also a “crush”, in Quito, the capital of Ecuador where I was born. I’d like to hear more about the World Festival of Black art and culture and the kind of artists that you met. You were very lucky to be a guest of the Senegal government, enjoying the concerts and the interaction with those nice people.
From what I read in your letter it’s a continent full of cultures, different climates and rich in natural resources, but also full of social injustice and poverty. It makes me think about some people of South America that also have to deal with similar problems. It’s interesting to see that people who are the poorest, are the most generous and humanitarian.
Personally I feel that some people have a stereotype about Africa that only includes extreme poverty, diseases and “savages”, which I think is not true. Therefore for me the only way to break that stereotype is travelling there and immersing myself in their culture. Africa is a biodiverse continent and a safari in the savanna is on my list of travels in the near future.
Cody Henneman
Wanda Sabir
English 1A 8:00AM-8:50AM
January 24, 2011
I really enjoyed reading what you wrote about your vacation. It appears to me that you are quite a well-traveled person. My grandmother is likewise and has similar stories as yours. The one thing that ALWAYS catches my attention about the stories oft he well-traveled is the fact that people in other countries and other parts of the world always seem so nice and warm. I aspire to also become a traveler or the world. I think that their are so many amazing and beautiful places in nature and in civilization. I enjoyed the fact that you were able to give your cell phone to someone on the bus so that they can give you directions to another person who would then relay it to you. In the United States many people would take that opportunity to take your phone and dash away at the next bus stop. My oh my what capitalism and materialism have created! Also, it is nice to have relationships in different parts of the world. I think that with globalization and such that having friends everywhere and seeing such sights is a great way to bring home a splash of a new culture and a new perspective of things around. People tend to say that the world is a small place but really, there is so much to see that I do not believe one person may be able to see it all in one lifetime.
Qiao Ming Zhang
Engish 1A Mon-Thur 9:00-9:50
After I read your letter, I knew that you have a great time at the trip to Africa. It was interesting and meaningful. Haiti, which is located in an area, there comes a lot of earthquakes and tsunami. I want to know how can you apply to go there? Because I want to be a volunteer, so that I can help the people who really need help. You have a good trip, and you knew a lot of new friends when you are in this trip. Thanks for you to share your good experiences with us.
The reason why I tood this class(English 1A), because I want to improve my English, reading skill, writing skill, the skill of how I can speak fluent English, how can I do a presentation with no shy? How to use the correct to speak in English? There are a lot of things that I really want to learn from this class. And this is the requirement for the transfer student.
Submitted by Audrey Topacio
English 1A 8-8:50am
January 24, 2011
Like the very first person to comment on here, I also hope I'm doing the homework correctly.
It is very nice to know that you, Ms Sabir, are a well-travelled person. I believe that it will be our advantage to have a teacher with a background like yours. An advantage because I presume since you are a traveller, which often is an open-minded person... of course I don't mean or expect that there will be leniency in terms of due dates and assignments, but you will be more open to your students' ideas on their writing. I don't know. I am lost in my thought. I guess what I'm trying to say is that, with an open-minded teacher, there will be an abundance of flowing ideas on our writing, more inspiration, more guidance and synergy.
Anyway, as for any information about me, I am a 19 year old young lady who has a jungle of thoughts. I can't quite organize the ideas, the words that I'd like to put into writing. You may have noticed in the beginning of this response. Being in this class, I am hoping to improve my writing skills. Oh how much improvement I need!
I do hope this is what I will take with me from this class and more.
My apologies for the informality.
Adrieanna Williams
English 1A Mon-Thur 8:00-8:50
I though your letter illustrated your journey very vividly. While you were reading it in class I was imagining you traveling through the hot desert. I could tell you were enjoying your stay. Your adventure took you to so many places and you were able to meet so a lot people. I hope to travel to Africa one day if I can get over my fear of flying that is. You make me want to go even more now. Your letter was very heartfelt and I hope you get to travel again soon!
Teneya Turner
1/24/11
English 1A
9-9:50AM Mon-Thurs.
It is so warming to my heart to hear about such a great experience you seem to have had. Learning about other people and their cultures always has peaked my interest. Since becoming a wife and a mother at such a young age, all of my traveling has been so far limited to the states. I do plan on attempting several life goals such as traveling abroad and taking all three of my girls on a trip to Morrocco to explore the people as well as the culture.
I did have several questions floating around to ask you about your personal and professional life however somehow you seemed to have answered many if not most of them in your 7 page writing or syllabus for my English 1A class with you. Hopefully we are able to cover the detials of as many of your trips as possible. Reading about them in your blogs or hearing about them from you gives me the opportunity to feel like I went to the same place or even visited the location with you.
I'm a 33 year old alameda mother of 3 girls ages 14, 13 and 8. Currently I've been out of high school over 15 years and counting. Since my graduation, I have attended several post-secondary institutions however only completing a certificate program in medical assisting but with a 4.0GPA raising my then 6 month old daughter pregnant with my second daughter. They are almost exactly 1 year apart. Needless to say I like to learn but have had trouble completing what I start and have been pushing myself to finish more and start less projects. I do plan on getting an A in the course which is why I'm up @ this late hour finishing this assignment.
Ashante Washington
1/25/11
English 1A
9-950am Mon-Thurs
Your letter was indeed sultry and sweet administering a wild sense of energy through my spirit like the Tanbou, a Haitian drum. I read the letter with such eagerness and thrill to hurry and get to the bottom of the page so I can move on to the next one as my eyes raced from left to right in a downward motion. I couldn't help but to read the letter three and four times because it made me feel so good as it reminded me of my own culture and forced me into a time portal back to my great grandfather, who was indeed a West Indian immigrant that spoke only French and knew no words of any other language.
My great grandfather is from the island of St. Vincent and came to America to create a better life for his children. But, unfortunately his good intentions for his children were followed by ruins and disaster because as he only offered the best, his children, one of them being my grandmother discovered the poisons and toxins America had to offer and led her family, my grandfather's legacy, down an unhealthy path to drugs, malice, and prostitution. My grandmother, who was lost in drugs, married my grandfather, a large mob boss and pimp in Portland, Oregon. My grandmother gave birth to seven West Indian, White and Creole mixed children, and my mother gave birth to nine children as well as my aunts giving birth to seven and eight children. Though my grandmother's mind became lost in the drugs, she returned back home to the islands, where she soon thereafter fell ill of Cancer and died.
Because my mother and aunts as well as uncles fell into drugs, crime, and prostitution, a lot of them lost their children including my mother. I was not raised by my mother and never really knew my mother until I reached the tender age of 16 yrs old. At that time when I did meet my mother, she attempted to introduce the same things that my grandmother had introduced to her, and attempted to lead me down such a path of destruction.
I was very angry with my mother because I didn't understand why she would introduce me to drugs, theft, and prostitution. Why would she do that to her children? And until right now, I've heald that belief and carried the thought with me, "How could she?".
But really, like you mentioned in your letter when you spoke about your friend, Aissata Ba from Northern Mali, you said, 'people don't do better because they honestly don't know what their options are'. How could I be upset with my mother for leading her children down a path of destruction, when that was all she ever knew and received? It was not a path of destruction for her. It was motherhood. That's how her mother treated her and taught her. That's how her mother "loved" her. That's all my mother ever knew.
Your letter brought back thoughts and memories of my culture, my grandmother as your comment about your friend brought thoughts of and referred to my mother.
I know that I am writing past the 250 word limit but please do not dock me any points. I was very intrigued and moved by your letter!
There's so much more I would love to add in regards to your letter. I could go on and on. I had more, but I’ve had to cut outexcerpts so that it may fit in the comment box. (smile) But seeing that I've been sitting at this computer for an hour and I still need to complete the remainder of the assignment as for as telling you about myself and my goals, but I need to pick up my visiting father and brother from the train station in about 40 minutes. I think it would be wise for me to move on to the next part of the assignment.
Please don't dock me points! (smile)
Summer Hurst
1/25/11
English 1A
9-950am Mon-Thurs
I have to get used to this blogging thing,I'm not really familar w/ commenting and posting assignmnets,but after a while, i get the hang of it.
Letter Response:
I enjoyed reading your letter. I'm sad that winter break is over. It's hard coming back from a long break and getting back into routine. I never traveled to Africa, sounds like alot of fun. During my break, I celebrated my sister's 22nd birthday, we went to the Southshore bowling place,we ordered pizza and played pool too. It was alot of fun. I'm going to be turning 20 in july, not sure what I want to do though. I didn't really do much over the break,the only fun thing I did was visit SF w/ my grandma, we took the fairy over there,walked around the different stores in the Nordstrom buliding and Union Square. I'll start writing more in these "cyber-assignments" when I get a hang of it, for right now, I got to go and complete other assignments.
Vanessa Dilworth
Professor Sabir
English 1A 9-9:50am
25 January 2011
Response to Letter
Reading your letter was like reading a fairytale all the different places you visited
and things you did were amazing. Traveling through Mali, Senegal and visiting the place
where former slaves were housed right before they were shipped off must have been a
real “Sankofa.” I think it is really cool that you traveled to all those places and
had all those experiences and are planning to go back to visit Casamance and Gambia.
Seeing the Presidents of African countries must have been very exciting too. A true
fairytale.
This semester in English 1A I would like to be introduced to topics affecting
the world at large and learn the different parts of speech. I think those two things are the
most predominate things that I would like to take with me when I leave. English is my
Major and I really enjoy learning new things and challenging myself with my English.
This semester I hope to accomplish these two things and more.
Summer Hurst
1/25/11
English 1A
9-950am Mon-Thurs
I forgot to answer the expansion of little questions from the letter,oops.
1. The strengths I bring to the class include: dedication,responsibilty, and work motivation.
2. The skills or knowledge,I would like to leave with once the class ends include: Confidence in my writing, and be more open minded about the world.
3. I can do many things to achieve this, one of which would be having more confident in myself and learn from my own mistakes.
Teepian Yu
Response to Letter
English 1A 9-9:50 AM
After reading your letter, I was captivated by the various settings. I have yet to travel very far in my 21 years of life. I have always wanted to visit at least one country on every continent. Your travel stories really inspire me. Hopefully I will be able to travel to many places as you do.
My name is Teepian Yu and I am 21 years old. I am a Filipino American student that loves to spend time with friends and family more than anything. I love watching food related television shows and listening to different genres of music. From my previous English class history, I can say that I am a good writer. I enjoy writing more so than reading. I find it very easy for me to get my thoughts into writing. I know how to cooperate with people and rarely have problems getting along with different personalities. From this class, I would like to take away a better grasp of the writing process. I hope to further improve my writing skills through the progress of this class. I don’t have any special request of anything to help me achieve my goals. I feel very comfortable doing things the way that you do them. I know how to adapt to different teachers methods and am very flexible. I know that I will be able to succeed as long as I work hard.
1/24/11
Sherri Short
English 1A
9:00-9:50 am
I really enjoyed reading your letter about your travels in Africa before your return for this semesters class. Its amazing to consider how many languages there are and how few are known to so many of us here in the U.S. I too have a particular enjoyment of traveling the world and don't have any problem traveling to far-away unknown places where I have no friends and don't know the language. I have yet to travel abroad to a desert though, but am looking forward to it very much!
A little about myself: I am a 'late-returning' student. That is I never had the opportunity to even go to college until later in life (at the age of 27) when work wasn't consuming my life. But, at that time I was dealing with a failing marriage and decided to drop my classes in my efforts to work on the relationship. Now I find myself a 'returning' student- eight years later! Higher education was never promoted in my family for some reason, but I'm guessing that it was for lack of knowing any different. The most we were encouraged to do was to get married and start families of our own. It does seem to be more of a southern attitude, that never particularly appealed to me as strongly as it did to the majority of my other family members.
Presently, I am working on completing my associates degree here in the Peralta Community College with the goal of transferring to a CA University to complete my bachelor's degree in Biology. Then I will be seeking entry to dental school and upon completing that I hope to have done well enough to be able to enter a specialty program for either endodontics or oral surgery. I am excited about my journey and happy to have this opportunity.
I have included the five goals and my strengths that I bring to the class as well as what I hope to gain from the class in the email that I sent to you before posting this.
Dereje Bizuneh
English 1A
9:00-9:50 M-TH
01/26/2011
I found your latter very interesting and a memory flash back for me because I was born and raised in Eastern Africa which is more similar society that you had been visiting. Your explanation about the place is fair and real. You wrote the good side of the society and also mention the bad tradition and dirt.
I’ve been here a little more than seven years and I met a hand full people who have a positive feeling about Africa. You are one of them. Hopefully, your trip and blog can inspire more people to visit Africa and find out about African people life style, culture, hospitality and their resources. Most Americans who I met think, Africa is the Dark Continent where the people doesn’t have to eat, no shelter to live and no government. It’s just like a jangle life. In addition, the media had a big role to make people’s perspective in such ways because they always focusing the negative side of Africa. Any ways, thank you for posting your trip experience and I’m looking forward to read more about your next trip.
God bless you!
This was posted by: Stacey Kidder, English 1A 9-9:50am
Date: 1/26/11
In response to your letter, I was intrigued by your travels. Though they aren't at all the same circumstances, I found that the style of writing between your's and my sister's recent travel blogs had many similarities. I haven't ever travelled outside of the U.S. due to a fear of flying over the ocean, but hope to one day overcome this fear and have my own share of experiences to document. I would like to see the world from a different view point, much like you were able to do. It's difficult to really grasp ideas of how other cultures live when you've only read about them and have yet to actually immerse yourself in it. I can also respect the fact that you were very much so independent throughout your travels because I'm not much of the type to go far out of my comfort zone without a friend alongside me. Overall, the letter was just a nice insight.
Posted by Kaijie Zhang
English 1A 9:00-9:50am
01/26/2011
Letter response:
I really felt interesting and warm my heart after read your letter. You traveled to Africa was that a great experience for learn other countries culture and make a lot of friend with wonderful people, so I can imagine that I am gonna get a lot of good experience from you and learn more different ways to improve my writing. You will be very informational on your course. Thank you for share your experience with us. I felt very comfortable because you gave me a lot of information about your teaching style. Personnally, I like to travel too because it can earn more experience either good or bad. For example, I can make friend everywhere and learn different culture. I think those experience can helpful for my writing. A good writer should be need a lot of different experience/stories.
Tyler Mecozzi
English 1A 8am
Syllabus Response
January 26
Overlooking the syllabus, I could not help but notice the emphasis of Northern California and women in the additional reading and review section. I am not certain why this is but I would love to know. I am sure you will explain come assignment time. I also noticed that a lot of the assignments will be turned in online. I have never submitted any classwork over the internet before, so this will be a transition for me; hopefully not a stressful one. I would prefer to physically hand my assignments to you so that I know for certain you have them and that they are not lost in cyberspace. Knowing how to turn in assignments online will be an important skill to have; however, especially if I am transferring to a UC this upcoming fall.
Studying epistemology is what caught my eye out of your whole syllabus. I love when I come into a class with certain expectations and come out more knowledgeable than I could have ever imagined. Epistemology sounds like my kind of fun and I would love for you to share more on this topic. Don't worry, I will ask in class :).
Jacob Wise
English 1A
8am
It must have been amazing to see all those sights in Africa. I especially liked the part with Wyclef Jean and Mama Africa. If I went to Africa I would probably go to South Africa. Firstly, I would love to see their rugby team play at the stadium there. Also, I find the history of South Africa very interesting. I wonder if we Americans could deal with racial problems like they do in South Africa. They have healed all the racial tension mere decades after Apartheid. In the US we are still recovering from centuries old conflicts.
My name is Jacob Wise. I was born in Berkeley at Alta Bates in 1992. I spent most of my childhood moving back and forth between my mom, in Mississippi and later Texas, and my dad, in various parts of California. I recently moved back to the East Bay from Dallas, Texas. The whole style of living in the south is completely different from the lifestyle here in California. At the moment I am learning two instruments, the guitar and the harmonica. Other than fiddling around with noises I like to read and write. Mostly I like to read about philosophy and psychology. Books like Thus Spoke Zarathustra by Friedrich Nietszche and The Stranger by Albert Camus. As far as writing goes I generally write free verse poems.
To the class I can offer my thoughts and my ears. My thoughts in addition to my ears are my greatest strengths. I am able to synthesize the information I get with my ears into very well considered thoughts. What I would like to get from this class is a better mechanism to relate my thoughts to other people. The reason for this is that I often talk in such a way that some people cannot understand the subject matter to which I refer. I am sure that as long as you create an environment that keeps me interested and does not censure my thoughts I will excel in your class.
Jacob Wise
English 1A
8am
It must have been amazing to see all those sights in Africa. I especially liked the part with Wyclef Jean and Mama Africa. If I went to Africa I would probably go to South Africa. Firstly, I would love to see their rugby team play at the stadium there. Also, I find the history of South Africa very interesting. I wonder if we Americans could deal with racial problems like they do in South Africa. They have healed all the racial tension mere decades after Apartheid. In the US we are still recovering from centuries old conflicts.
My name is Jacob Wise. I was born in Berkeley at Alta Bates in 1992. I spent most of my childhood moving back and forth between my mom, in Mississippi and later Texas, and my dad, in various parts of California. I recently moved back to the East Bay from Dallas, Texas. The whole style of living in the south is completely different from the lifestyle here in California. At the moment I am learning two instruments, the guitar and the harmonica. Other than fiddling around with noises I like to read and write. Mostly I like to read about philosophy and psychology. Books like Thus Spoke Zarathustra by Friedrich Nietszche and The Stranger by Albert Camus. As far as writing goes I generally write free verse poems.
To the class I can offer my thoughts and my ears. My thoughts in addition to my ears are my greatest strengths. I am able to synthesize the information I get with my ears into very well considered thoughts. What I would like to get from this class is a better mechanism to relate my thoughts to other people. The reason for this is that I often talk in such a way that some people cannot understand the subject matter to which I refer. I am sure that as long as you create an environment that keeps me interested and does not censure my thoughts I will excel in your class.
Mary Watson
English 1A
9:00 A.M.
I was not exactly sure what was required of me in this response to the syllabus, but I would rather be wrong then not turn a response in at all. :D So, I did get a little confused about what all was required, what books I need to purchase, and whether or not I will be able to keep up intellectually with you. :D But I know I love a challenge and will try my hardest. I also had no idea of where to start a search for the book by or about a women and may need your help. The layout of the syllabus was very different from what I have seen, but this is only my second semester so that is not very surprising. It was in paragraph form kind of like a story. I think I place too much pressure on myself and am trying to read to deep at the same time that may be the cause of my confusion. Any who, I am going to give my best in this course. :D Thank you for having me.
Mary Watson
English 1A
9:00 A.M.
Response to Letter
Wow is all I can say in response to your letter. You have been so many places and seen so many things. It's amazing and I too hope I can one day experience such adventures. I believe this class will teach me to better structure my sentences and expand my vocabulary. I believe it will be fun and I will pass. I need to pass :D Thanks for sharing your adventures they are really encouraging to me that my life will be just as fun and full of learning.
Eleanore Johnston
English 1A
9:00Am
Dear Ms. Sabir,
Hello, My name is Eleanore. I was born in Plymouth Minnesota but moved to Alameda when I was six. Someday i plan to move back but i would like to finish college first. I am going to school to be a two year RN. My dream is to work with pregnant women and babies. I am still trying to decide if after I finish the RN program if I want to go to midwifery school.
I have never been the best writer but really do try my best to improve. To be honest I don't enjoy reading all that much either but depending on the book I could get into it. I am excited to get started with this class. I plan on improving my reading and writing skills to better prepare me for the rest of my life to come. Thank you and have a wonderful day!
- Eleanore Jonhston
I couldnt find this letter so i responded to the syllabus and. How ever someone from a different class tipped me off so today I am responding to your letter. I find your story of your time in africa very interesting and Im glad you had the good fortune to meet so many nice and helpful people. My strengths are my assertive nature and my love of reading along with my ability to grasp the concepts with in my reading. I am also not afraid to voice my opinions and beliefs, that how ever does not mean I feel other peoples opinions and beliefs are wrong(unless they are racist, sexist or culturally intolerant). Im also not shy so participation wont be an issue.
I hope to leave this class with the ability to write at the university level. I also want to be able to write long papers with out struggle to fill the page space and meet wold count level.
10:04 PM
Zinaida Dzhilavdaryan
Professor Wanda Sabir
English1A
1/27/11
Thank you for sharing with us about your trip. After a class I went to the cashier’s office to get a parking ticket. And anyone who was there on Wednesday morning knows how crazy it was. I mean the line. So, I spend one hour in line, and it's so nice that I had this letter with me. As soon as I start reading, I forgot about the line. I felt like I visited the countries and cities you described in your letter. I know about some African countries only by pictures and videos. I would like to visit Kenya, since I heard a lot about safaris, and they have a great coffee. And if I would visit any of these countries, I would definitely spend plenty of time at one of the street markets you wrote about. The more different people I meet, the more I understand that we all are so different and so similar at the same time. Every country and culture is beautiful and interesting. And if people would travel more, I am sure there would be less wars and conflicts in the world. I wish you more interesting trips to make and stories to write.
Jeffrey To
To:Wanda Sabir
English 1A M-Th 8-8:50
1/27/2011
Letter response + goals for semester
Letter response :
Dear Professor Wanda Sabir:
Your time off sounded so fun. It seems like you enjoy traveling all around Africa. Your bus ride doesn’t seem that different from Oakland buses. Well, Oakland buses are better in a way from your bus experience in Dakar. I never knew there are such kind people in the world today. The prison in Mali sounds interesting. Well. That caught my attention while reading your letter. I never thought living conditions could be that bad in the world. I would see it a lot on tv but I always thought they were stereotypes of people trying to make Africa savage like. I enjoyed reading your summer and happy im taking your class.
My name is Jeffrey To, I just graduated Oakland Technical High School this year. My major is civil engineering. I love engineering because it just fascinates me. Ever since, I was little I would always play with Legos. At Oakland Tech, they have different school academies and engineering was one of them. I never got a chance to be in the Engineering academy because I transferred into the school late. During, my senior year at Oakland Tech I took honor English, honors government, and AP physics. I don’t really think my writing is that good despite the fact I took honors classes. During my senior year I applied to most of the UC college and states but got rejected from LA and Berkeley. I did however get into UC Davis but I didn’t want to go there. Community college wasn’t exactly my first choice of college. Since im here, I hope I can learn a lot from your English class.
The strengths I have in English are decent. I can write a essay but in my standards they arent that good or doesn’t meet my standards at all. I know what essays consist of but just think I need to learn a lot more. I just hope my writing meet your standards. I hope by the end of the semester improve my writing skills. When I start a essay I would always get lost or don’t know what to write or how to start it off. When I say improve my writing skills I mean make my writing better. Well, I love when teachers comment on my work. It give me a sense they took the time to read and comment it. Feed backs shows what I did good or bad and it helps me improve my writing.
Semester goals:
1.Complete English 1A with a decent grade.
2. Get at least a B in all my classes
3. Improve my writing skills
4. Complete all my homework on time =]
5. Study more
I envy your travels across Africa! I have family in South Africa and have visited many times, mostly early in my childhood, but never seen the rest of the continent.
Most of my own traveling in recent has been confined to Europe and the United States.
I lived in Tennessee for two months in my high school years and found it very beautiful there; the climate is nearly tropical, and I miss the feeling of hot, damp summers and impossibly green tones of the thick grass and forests.
When I was 18 I went to England for a visit with family there, and had too much fun with the drinking age!
More recently I have stayed in Leiden in the Netherlands, a wonderful little university town full of people from all over the world and medieval masonry.
I feel I have a moderate strength with English; I have an excellent grasp on spelling, syntax, grammar, and punctuation, but often have difficulty disciplining my thoughts into a tidy essay. I would like to learn to write in a more professional and less rambling tone. I am studying Cognitive Neuroscience but I would like to pursue writing for pleasure while keeping the option of a writing career open to me.
I look forward to learning from you and developing my technique.
-Theodore
Tyleena Cain
English 1A
Mon-Thurs 8am
Ms.Sabir
I really loved your letter. I think it is great that you were able to travel, and experience the things you did. I hope that one day after school is done and I have become established in my career I am able to do the same. It really amazed me how long you had to wait for transportation. I don’t know how Oakland public transit works but I do know that in san Francisco busses come back to back, so to hear that you waited so long is really weird for me because I assumed that busses all pretty much ran on the same kind of timeline. Now I think about it other places with not as much financial stability as San Francisco for instance would not have that many busses to travel so closely together. Buses never take so long to fill people are usually standing within three minutes of getting on. I know you felt a great honor being a guest of the government and having all your expenses paid for.
Your letter is inspiring and gives me even more confidence in knowing that I can reach and achieve all things I want like going to the desert. I’m sure I won’t like the dust much either, but I also know the whole experience will over power the dust. Wow I know doing all that traveling on what seems to be the same day had you very exhausted; I know I get tired driving from here to Fresno so I could just imagine how you felt. I have a son that just turned 8 like your granddaughter his birthday is October 30th. I wanted him to do a party at the build a bear but he refused and said his friends will not want to make teddy bears. So I ended up taking them to john incredible pizza out in Stockton ca where they drove bumper cars played arcade games and ate all the pizza their tummies could handle. We also went to the pumpkin patch out there where they had a zip line and all the boys got on but not one girl.
I really look forward to getting to know more about you. The things you like are very good. How can one go wrong with art,theater, film and music? It’s simple they can’t
Answers to questions
My goals for the semester are:
1. I want to get an A in all my classes I got 2A’s and 2B’s last semester so I know I can achieve all A’s this time.
2. I would like to spend more time utilizing my resources like the math lab, writing center, etc. This is hard because, I am a mother of a 2yr old daughter and 8yr old son. They require much of my time because I am in school I don’t want them to feel neglected but at the same time I want to be successful in what I am doing to secure their future.
3. Get to know my peers I only talk to the people I know in my classes which limits my ability to learn new things from different people
4. Get back to writing. I always loved writing poetry I wrote one last semester about my life that was published in the amandla news letter. I have not wrote in 6months and writing is my outlet so I have some backed up pipes
5. Get involved in some of the activities that go on on campus. Last semester a lot of things happen that I didn’t get a chance to attend so hopefully this changes this time around.
My strength I think I bring is objectiveness. I sometime over analyze things, but that helps me to think critically about situations; a skill that not everyone has.
I would like to learn how to write and be precise without using so many words that can make a reader get bored and not want to continue reading. I battled with this in some of my previous essays I have written.
I believe if you just talk on how to do this it can help a lot, or if you have an essay you would like to share that would be awesome. I feel that this is something I may have to learn and happens over time.
Sometimes I have issues with childcare and that is why I get to school late sometimes. My ex-husband is always late getting here to get my daughter and take my son to school, but until I have a better childcare provider he is all I have.
Amgalanbaatar Sarantuya
English 1A
M-Th 9-9:50am
27 January 2011
Wow! Your letter was really amazing and so descriptive that I actually felt like I was there. It sounds like you love to travel and I too love traveling to new and interesting places. I have to go to the DMV tomorrow and that is going to be interesting.. I shall toughen up through the long lines and be patient just like you were. Anyways, you are a very interesting person and different from all the other teachers I'd say. That makes me want to go to class and participate!
Now about me:
I would say I'm really patient, quiet and know when to speak. But at times, that can work against me. I would like to be a better reader and a writer all around and pick up good habits of doing things on time. For example, this is late because of my lack of paying attention and reading things thoroughly. I like to work by myself and feel like I work even better when the instructor helps me personally. So I'm really excited for this semester and looking forward to getting into this class. I really hope I get in!
Marcella Miles
Professor Sabir
English 1A 8-8:50
28 January 2011
Letter Response
The letter was very inspiring to read and listen to in class. It was indeed enjoyable to hear about your trials, misfortunes, and journeys. It seemed like you lived through quite a tale on your trip. I hope to travel as you have one day, but I can't say that I'll be as keen as you were to visit a desert. The singing balloon was very cute as you had stated. As for me, my name is Marcella Miles. I was born in Oakland, but lived in Alameda for a majority of my life. I enjoy writing and reading so I do think I will do well in your class. I am a bit of an overachiever, but I believe it is far more helpful than harmful. At the moment I am undeclared for my major, but I have been considering English. I enjoy being with my close friends and reading. I am already enjoying the class, so I am looking forward to what's in store for the rest of the semester.
Teepian Yu
English 1A
9-9:50
After reading your letter, I was captivated by the various settings. I have yet to travel very far in my 21 years of life. I have always wanted to visit at least one country on every continent. Your travel stories really inspire me. Hopefully I will be able to travel to many places as you do. I can see that the way you use your blogging to really express yourself. The way that you write in this particular blog entry really seems like you are getting all your thoughts out. I especially appreciated the part of your letter discussing the difficulties of speech in Mali. I myself find interest in the subtle little things in life.
Adalie Villalobos
Professor Sabir
English 1A 8-8:50
28 January, 2010
Letter
WOW! What an experience you had Ms. Sabir. It sounds like quit an adventure you had, and a memorable one I should say. In the beginning when the bus was too crowded and the pregnant woman could not be able to sit down, made me angry. It makes me mad to know that there are really people out there who just do not care about others and are so selfish. The little boy who kept getting hit by the suitcase amazed me because I would not have had as much patience as the boy.
I would love to learn French because it sounds like such a beautiful language and it would be great to learn since I want to travel a lot. It is amazing to hear that you were added to the American delegation. That must have felt great. Your adventures sound like a thrillride and i enjoyed reading all about them. I would love to travel the world as much as you have, given the opportunity.
I look very much forward to being in your class again.
Angela M. Vasquez
Professor Sabir
English 1A
Response to letter
It sounds like you do a lot of traveling and I think that's great. I hope that I too can one day travel all around to world. I think what I found most interesting is that you actually trust the goodness in people and you believe in the kindness of strangers. Me personally, I couldn't do that. I don't trust people in my own community let alone in another country. It's nice to know that there are still people in the world who can see the good in others.
To: Wanda Sabir
From: Alex Peña
Date: January 30, 2011
Class: English 1A
Time: 9am class
Response To The Letter:
To tell you the truth professor I really admire what you do in your time away from school. I say this because I really don’t know many people that just decide to go out and do big things like you. Many people I know ether don’t take vacations, or when they do they just sit back and relax and really don’t do much of anything to escape their everyday like routine. Just from this writing I can see that you like to travel a lot. I see that you have been too many places in Dakar Senegal, Mali and even a couple times to Haiti. For some reason I believe that you have been too many other places around the world.
I can see that you are a great strong women and d very good with trusting and meeting the right people. Because I don’t see myself planning a trip to somewhere I never been with someone I met in a concert. But at the same time I admire your easy going sprit because I sometime see myself stuck in the same routine for one reason or another, and sometimes you get used to it. A lot of that I think that has to do with the fact that I and the people I hang out with doesn’t have the time and money to do all this. This is one of the reasons that I’m going to school and hopefully one day I will have the chance to travel around the world like you.
To: Wanda Sabir
From: Joseline Mejia
Date: January 30, 2011
Class: English 1A
Time:8-8:50am
Letter response:
Professor Sabir..I really like the letter you wrote to us. I love the detail you put in your writing I create my own image in my head and it makes reading more exciting. I think it's really cool that you like to travel and meet new places, I'm sure we"ll get to hear about more places you"ve been too this semester. I wish to accomplish by the end of this semester to learn how to express my self more on paper and creating an image for other people to see.
Drishya Chhetri
English 1A 8:00-8:50
1/31/2011
I somehow ended up posting a comment on your letter on the response for your syllabus so i am going to write a response to your syllabus. i hope i didn't make things too complicated.
looking at the syllabus it seems like there is going to be a lot of reading and writing. I am not big on reading or writing but i am optimistic and I hope to improve my reading and writing skills.I am looking forward to read Kite Runner because i have heard very good reviews on it.
Vanessa Rocha
Professor Sabir
English 1a- 8Am
Response to the Letter
It was really nice to hear and read once again the letter about your trip and your family. One day I'll be able to travel abroad too, my dream is to visit the desert also, but I don't think I can handle all the sand, sun and zero wind. You have a way of telling your story that makes me think I'm there already. Congrats for the fact that you were added to the American delegation, you must be proud of yourself! I look forward for being in this class and learning a lot from you.
Reagan Lolo
Professor Wanda Sabir
English 1A
Response to letter
Your letter was indeed sultry and sweet administering a wild sense of energy through my spirit like our Tanbou, the Haitian drum. I read the letter with such eagerness and thrill to find more and more about your fabulous adventure. I am already impressed by I have read so far.
Your letter brought back thoughts and memories of my culture. I was very intrigued and moved by your letter. Like you I love traveling but your experiences are incomparable. I have never been to Africa but reading about your experience there makes me think that it is a lot of fun to be in the motherland.
There's so much more I would love to say in regards to your letter. I could go on and on. I am simply very grateful to have the chance to take another class with someone that has such a beautiful record.
In English 1A this semester I am looking forward to improving my writing. Although my grammar is not perfect yet, I have to admit that I have learned a lot from taking 201B with you last semester, and now I am looking forward to even more this semester. English is not my language; in fact I know that in order to succeed in the United States academically I truly have to work harder than those who are originally from here. I am a political science major meaning my task will usually involves talking and writing, so a great skill in English will be highly needed.
I know that the semester is going to be challenging, but I am also ready for the challenge
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