Today in classYesterday, in both classes we broke into groups according to where people were in the text. In the second class we had 4-5 groups: up to chapter 10, chapter 12, chapter 20, and chapter 34-40. The homework was to read at least 5 more chapters and to bring in a photo of something you think is beautiful. We shared our ads selling beauty yesterday in the 9-10 a.m. class.
Today in the first class we shared our ads and/or pictures of what we thought was beautiful. Deon shared from a magazine called DQ and Dominique shared from a Spanish language magazine, Angel shared an ad by Dove which looked at alternatives to the popularized notions of beauty. Melissa shared the same ad campaign with us yesterday. Marty added an observation about mannequins that were too large to fit model's clothing at a fashion event she attended. If the mannequins were about size 4; what size were the models? It was great the way students in the first class admitted to being seduced by the ad. The idea that one could buy Russell Simmon's ex-wife by purchasing the jewelry she was wearing (and nothing else), was certainly a consideration. Deon's premise was the use of beauty to sell products.
Some people call this exploitation of women and girls, and it's not beauty, it's sex. I'll show you a video on this.
I gave the second class an initial planning sheet handout. For others I have put them in a folder outside my office. You have seen the questions before. I forgot to mention in the second class the section in Hacker which looks at "invention strategies." Check out The Writing Process page 10: 1b Experiment with ways to explore your subject. Questioning is one of the strategies listed. Also included in this section of the book is a planning guide, how to develop an outline and when it is useful. Section 2 (19) looks at writer's block, pages 20-38 look at developing effective thesis sentences. Do the exercises on page 23 for practice and online (24). There are sample essays which have been revised you can look at, along with (if you continue reading) a section on developing effective paragraphs. It's a great section.
Freewrite and Cyber AssignmentThe second class arrived at different times. Many students had forgotten that we meet in the Writing Center on Thursdays. Today in both classes we developed an essay outline from the introduction posted on the blog on the topic
beauty. Some students didn't have copies of what they posted, so I printed copies. The freewrite was to develop an outline for the body of the essay and then let a classmate write the conclusion and then each student re post everything: Introduction, two paragraph outline with evidence and the conclusion. Students were instructed to put the author's name in parentheses. In the second class Melissa and Marty planned to email each other their essay outlines and develop conclusions and then email this back to each other for posting.
I reiterated to students that they were not starting from scratch, that they had other sentences to use developed earlier this week during the topical invention exercises we did in class and shared. If you are confused read the other posts first. Please post at the 2/25 link.
If you haven't looked at Diana Hacker's
Rules for Writers, now is the time. Read
The Writing Process,
Document Design,
The Basics,
Grammar,
Clarity,
Punctuation,
Research, etc. We will look at argument next week (344).
Monday, March 3. I will show you a video on argumentation. There will be a handout from Hacker on Argument for you to read, along with an assignment you will complete in groups on Tuesday, March 4, (367-8) and then we'll talk about it. There will be another handout, Propaganda Techniques with a Cyber-essay response. The questions are at the end of the essay. This essay is due Thursday, March 6 on the blog. I will give you a separate place to post for this by Wednesday afternoon sometime.
Your essay plan for the
Alice Walker: A Life essay, along with the outline is due Wednesday for peer review. The first draft of the essay is due: Tuesday, March 11. The final draft plus a peer review, reading logs and other writing is due, Thursday, March 13.
The final draft is due, I repeat—with all your notes, Thursday, March 13, on a disk or jump drive. You can give me any notes as paper copies. Do not give me original work. We will have our conferences next week also to discuss your body of work so far. We are officially finished with the book,
Alice Walker: A Life, Monday, March 3. Our prewriting exercises will be exploring the theme students would like to address in their own essays, not mine practice one: “beauty.” Use the thesis sentences we developed in class to complete the assignment and post the introduction to an essay on beauty, two topics sentences and their evidence, and a conclusion at the post for Monday, February 25.
Some students have indicated that the language used in Alice Walker: A Life, is hard to grasp or comprehend. If you have been having trouble come see me in my office hours. Also, a tutor would help. Utilize the Tutoring Center and the Writing Center. It's too bad students have waited until we completed the book to say something. It might be too late to catch up.
Extra CreditI told students who attend the event today in the Student Lounge from 12-2: Books not Bars not Death they can have extra credit. Please post comments on the event here.
Theatre eventsWe are going to see Sonny's Blues at Lorraine Hansberry Theatre, 620 Sutter Street in San Francisco, tonight. (Powell Street exit, walk up, Sutter crosses Powell, turn left at Sutter and the theatre is inside Art Academy University on your right). We will meet at the Lake Merritt BART station in Oakland at 6 p.m. inside at the attendant's booth by the ticket machines. Call me on my cell phone if you are running late or can't find us.
Thursday, March 6, we will attend Come Home at The Marsh, in San Francisco. The play begins at 8 p.m. and is 70 minutes long. I'm going to see
W. Kamau Bell Curve on Sunday, March 2 at the Berkeley Jewish Community Center of the East Bay. The event begins at 7 p.m. It is $20. If you bring someone of a different race, he or she gets in free.
See www.wandaspicks.com to read about these plays. The review of
Sonny's Blues is in the archives. There is an interview with the director, Margo Hall in web exclusives.