Thursday, January 28, 2010

Cyber-Assignment 3

Letter to the President re: State of the Union Address. Post the letter here and your comments on student letters. Remember, respond to one student letter.
Homework due by Monday, February 1, 2010

Respond to President Obama's State of the Union Address. Write him a letter. Tell him how he is doing, compared to how he thinks he is doing. Focus your response on 3-5 areas of interest. You do not need to address all of his comments. Use one direct quote and two free paraphrases.

Oh the letter needs to be minimally 250 words. As a rule, cyber essays are 1 page long (250 words).

Don't forget to use signal phrases.

For each cyber-post assigned this semester, respond to at least one student post. Even if I don't tell you to, do so anyway.

Oh, sorry for the mix up on yesterday's assignment. I fixed it. I am going to look for another classroom. I will let you know if we are going to relocate next Thursday. Have a great weekend. We will start Half the Sky next week, Monday.

Monday, February 1, is poet, Langston Hughes' birthday. If you have a favorite book or poem by him you can bring it in to share for extra credit. Oh, Howard Zinn (87)died yesterday (or the day before). He was a scholar and activist and social critic who wrote, A People's History of the United States. We will miss his scholarship and wit. If any of you know his work and would like to share something with the class next week, let me know. He taught at Spelman and was Alice Walker's professor. She left Spelman when he was fired (long story).

Continue working on the paraphrase assignments in SPHE. Try to complete it by next week, if not Monday, sometime next week. I will go over the answers on Wednesday or sooner if you have questions. Let me know. We will begin having a study hour next week on either Monday or Wednesday or both. Dominique will host them. I am available for consult on Tuesdays and Thursdays and late Mondays, after 3.

My style is loose and fluid, so if you are the type of student who needs a lot of structure, this is not the class and I am not the one. I will post each meeting what was covered and don't worry the syllabus is coming, but you have enough in the letter for now. The syllabus will have due dates, but the plan is flexible and we are in the world as active participants so sometimes other issues and topics take precedent. Oh, here I am again going off on a tangent.

I am trying to meet folks half-way. I am not going to close off the tributary, but I will build a bridge. This is the best place to make sure we are on the same page literally. I am a writer who writes, and it is the writing and the exchange of ideas that I really enjoy most about what I do here in the academy.

Tuesday, Feb. 2, at 12:30 PM to 1:30 PM there is a Black History Month event in the student lounge. There is also an essay and poster competition for this month as well. If you are interested in the details ask me. I have to find my notes (smile). If you go to any of the college hour events and write about it, you can have extra credit. Keep track of the extra work.

Look here tomorrow and the syllabus will be up. I'll give folks a copy Monday or Tuesday.

Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Cyber-Assignment, Thursday, January 28

Summary

Summarize your article. Be sure to include the source and author in the first line of the summary. The length will vary depending on how long the original article is. If you know how to do a works cited page, include it here.

Include the URL for the post so others can read the original text.

Respond to 1-2 student summaries. Read the article also and then note whether or not the student included all pertinent ideas in the summary. If not, mention those which you felt neglected and why.
Cyber-Assignment

Homework this evening is to post your literal and free paraphrases for the week per your article.

One was due Monday and the second was due Tuesday and another Wednesday. We swapped work again this morning. students commented on each others' work, noting when writers successfully maintained the intent of the original. This attention to the intent or commitment to a translation or interpretation which honors the integrity of the original work is key to a successful paraphrase.

One of your paraphrasing assignments this week asked you to reflect on the act of paraphrasing , both literal and free, to discuss its difficulties and benefits, both short and long term.

Post all of those assignments here (Monday-Thursday, January 24-28). If you have posted the assignments elsewhere, repost them here as well. Try to always post the assignments where they are due, otherwise, you will not get credit for your work.
Second week of classes, first full week

Today in class we continued working through the exercises in Stewart Pidd Hates English.

We reviewed the Wordy to Concise, and then continued with the Free Paraphrase. The goal is to finish this section by Monday, Feb. 1.

Homework this evening is to summarize your article. The length of your response depends on how long your article is. If it is a three page article then the response should be minimally a three paragraph essay. If it is shorter, then one paragraph might suffice.

No pressure, this is a rehearsal (smile).



Field trip

I will hand out fliers for our first field trip in the morning: Tim Wise at www.speakout.com The lecture is Thursday, Feb. 4, 7 PM at the First Congregational Church of Oakland on 27th and Harrison in Oakland. The cost is $10. Let me know Monday, Feb.1 if you'd like to attend. Bring your money as well. I have to purchase tickets in advance. You can invite guests.


L-202E

Beginning tomorrow, we will meet in L-202E. I will walk students over. If you are late, this is where we will be for the rest of the semester.

Library Orientation
On Wednesday, January 17, 8 and 9 AM we will meet at the reference desk for a 50 minute library orientation with Professor Steve Gerstle.

Future plans
Next week we will continue paraphrasing and work on summarizing texts, and writing an essay where we use summary and paraphrase. Are any of you planning to watch the State of the Union Address? Heads-up...we will be reading it (smile).

Students are stressing over grades already. I will post the syllabus soon, so you can figure out how to get an A. We will run the SPHE at the same time we are reading Half the Sky and other selections. About half of the SPHE essays will be written in class on Thursdays. I am serious about the "review." We will be whizzing through the book, so keep up. We will do the essays and exercises chronologically.

Nothing disappears on the blog. Everything is archived, so when the post disappears, it is just archived and you can find it if you go to the month and year in the index located on the page here.

Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Today in class we completed exercises in SPHE on paraphrasing--literal paraphrasing. We didn't get to the homework, however, tomorrow we will review it: literal and free paraphrases.

In SPHE students are to complete pp. 339-380 by Monday, February 1.

Note: we have a library orientation Wednesday, Feb.17, 8 AM and 9 AM. We will meet at the reference desk. Put the date in your phone and planner.

Homework recap:
Bring in the article you have been working with this week along with the two literal paraphrases and the two free paraphrases of the same two passages. You will post this on the blog Thursday, January 28. Provide a link to your article for students to see the original text in its entirety.

It can look like this:

1. Orginal passage from article

A Literal paraphrase 1
B Literal paraphrase 2
C Free paraphrase

2. Original passage from article 2

A Literal paraphrase 1
B Literal paraphrase 2
C Free paraphrase

We will discuss the difference between a summary and a paraphrase tomorrow and practice summarizing. Homework will be to summarize the complete article. I will walk around and confer with students over how many words or paragraphs.

Come to class on time and purchase your textbooks. I am making copies only up through next week, after that you are on your own.

I am working on the syllabus now and will post it by tomorrow. Half the Sky is only $11 on Amazon, so if you have a credit card, try to get it on-line and use the next day shipping option. We will use the book beginning Monday, February 1.
Subject: Biography Resource Center

Students will have to identify an author/book about or by a female author this semester. The Biography Resource Center seems like a good place to begin one's search, especially if one doesn't have an author or subject in mind.

The library has a new online subscription that may be of interest. Biography Resource Center contains thousands of biographies from published sources. If students need to do biographical research, have they can go to the COA library reference desk and the librarian there can show them how to use the database.

There is no reference service from 1:00 to 3:00 M-Th. Please advise your students to plan ahead.


Reference Desk: (510) 748-2398

Saturday, January 23, 2010

Since making the first observation, if any student is having trouble posting, you can send it to me and I will post it for you. I did this for three students this afternoon. This is for all assignments, not just the first one.

Thursday, January 21, 2010

Some of the emails have bounced and one, I couldn't read: Catalina Martinez. If you don't receive an email from me, this might be what happened. If you are reading this, obviously you found the website (smile).

Wednesday, January 20, 2010

January 20, 2010

Greetings Students:

Happy New Year! I hope 2010 brings a level of academic and personal competence you expect. I also hope this year has many residual pleasant surprises in store for you, the kind of surprises one finds when he or she works hard.

I am an easy person to talk to, and I am relatively flexible as long as standards are not compromised. Writing is a process which takes a certain level of practice; if students do not put in the time, desired results, like a passing grade, is impossible to achieve.

This semester we are looking at women who have accomplished much in the face of tremendous obstacles. There is only one assigned reader (I just added another book, read on).

I will pass out essays and poetry from time to time to augment this absence of texts you have to purchase. Each student will have the opportunity to read a book, an autobiography or biography about a woman they admire—preferably, the woman is alive and even living in Northern California. Students will write an essay about this person and make an oral presentation. This book can coincide with the social entrepreneur assignment, which looks at a person in the San Francisco Bay Area Community who as a business person is changing society in a positive way. This person can be an artist: performance or visual, an educator or a politician.

We will be reading and writing and thinking, and writing about what we are thinking, this semester. Get plenty of sleep; I expect you to be awake at 8 AM, 9 AM and 10 AM. I also don’t expect students who have the afternoon class to fall asleep. Lunch makes some folks sleepy and hunger in the morning does the same, so if you need coffee, bring it with you to class. Eat breakfast at home.

If you have taken my class before, we will be using the book: Stewart Pidd Hates English. For students who have successfully completed the book, they will write other essays and then use the SPHE model to critique their essays per my corrections. Such students will develop their own templates for the errors made, if any, of the essays written.

I usually have a theme, but outside of women, this semester will be about you. Each of us will set goals and develop plans to achieve these objectives. College is bigger than a passing grade; higher education is an opportunity I hope each of you is not too busy to take advantage of. Success in life is about developing relationships. So much of what we achieve is tied to who we know and the links we establish between the known and the unknown or what is possible. Another name for what is possible is opportunity.

I went to Dakar, West Africa, over the winter recess. I stayed with people I didn’t know; I knew someone who knew the person who knew the family and that person. In one instance, I met the person on-line. Of the three people, the only person I’d met before was Pape whom I’d met a year earlier at a conference. It was intuitive like this my entire visit. Without linguistic ability—no French and no Wolof, I was somewhat dependent on the kindness of a lot of strangers and it worked out. It was hard sometimes, and I got lost a lot when alone, but it worked and I made friends for life.

College is like that too. If this is your second semester and you don’t know any students, have any phone numbers or have any study buddies, then this is the semester to establish at least two relationships with peers. No one can get to the top alone, well maybe some people can, but it will be a cold and lonely walk on the moon.

We will look at personal responsibility and communication. We will also look at inspiration and how one stays motivated and inspired when it seems that you’re the only one who notices or cares. This is where the fan club or personal cheering section comes in handy.

I teach four classes: two English 1A –Monday-Thursday, 8-8:50 (meets in D206 4 Units 23043) and 9-9:50 AM (meets in D205 4 Units, 23044); English 201 A/B 10-11:50 MW (meets in D229 4 Units 230660; (201B 23074), and English 201 A/B MW 1-2:50 (meets in A213 4 Units 23067; 201B 23075). We will meet in a classroom with technology once a week, beginning in a couple of weeks.

I use technology a lot. For those students who are not technologically savvy; keep an open mind and you will leave the course more capable than when you entered. I’d also suggest enrolling in a basic keyboarding and/or computer class to get more practice. COA has computer labs which are free and available to students who enroll in a free course. Visit the open lab, in the L-bldg. to register for the course or see your counselor. Students cannot use the academic labs until enrolled, and it takes 24 hours for the enrollment to take effect, so don’t wait until the last moment like when a paper is due and you can’t use the lab to print it to enroll. The academic labs are on the second floor of the Learning Resource Center (LRC). The library is on the first floor.

What else?

I live in Oakland and have two daughters and a granddaughter whose birthday is Friday, January 22. She will be 7. I am going to her school for cupcakes. I am the eldest of four children and was born in New Orleans. Yes, my family was affected by Katrina. I lost family and all my family in parts of Mississippi and New Orleans lost homes. Most are back in their rebuilt homes in Mississippi and Louisiana.

I love to write and write professionally. While I don’t expect you to love it as much as I do, I hope you will come to find writing easier to accomplish and feel less intimidated by the end of the course. The plan is for each student to gain skills which will make him or her feel more adept at addressing the writing tasks students meet within and without the academy in their daily lives. Writing is communication.

Reading and writing and thinking are not limited to college. In western culture the text is the basis for all knowledge. If it isn’t in a book, information is assumed to lack credibility. The text is like a receipt for services. It is evidence that what you say exists. This is not true of all cultures. In some cultures, one’s verbal agreement is binding; not here. If one wants evidence or proof, it needs to be written down somewhere and at times, notarized (smile). When I was in Dakar last Friday, two men came flying out of a building, rushing to the mosque to meet with the imam to marry their children. There is often no license, just the agreement between the two heads of the family (fathers or male guardians), that their children can wed. The civic ceremony or paperwork happens later once the religious ceremony occurs. Oral contracts carry the same weight or perhaps more than the written word in this culture. I was raised this way also; what one said reflected one’s character—one’s word was one’s bond and I was taught that one should give her life before her word failed. Now I wasn’t going to kill myself, but just the idea made me stop and think before I spoke. I understood the importance of words, that one didn't throw them around carelessly. When I got older, I learned that this didn’t mean one was perfect and that retraction wasn't possible when one made an error. I learned that it was okay to correct statements uttered later when more information warranted a changed position.

My kids loved this—a mother who admitted she wasn’t perfect (smile).

That said, this is a portfolio based course, buy a travel drive and keep all of your work. Paper matters here. Do not throw anything away, especially graded work—keep all your drafts. Well before I start making this letter into a syllabus, which I will give you at the next meeting, let’s see, what else can I tell you?

I will not take it personally if you decide after this first class to take another one. We have many great teachers at the College of Alameda and in the Peralta College District, like Laney through the Tube, so don’t feel stuck. However, if you are stuck—this is the best time for you, as I said earlier, talk to me when you don’t understand a concept, if you are having difficulties in the class, or problems at home are spilling over into your academic life. I am not a therapist, counselors are trained in this field, but I can direct you to appropriate assistance if the problem is beyond my expertise. Dropping the class is always an option if you can’t give it 100 percent. I don't give incompletes.

If you are a returning student, let this be the last time you take this course. Complete it.

I know life happens, but life is going to continue happening. It keeps moving along whether you move or not, so set your goals, tell your family what they are, and ask for their support. Tell your family when you have a paper due, when you need to study, how to assist you in your short and long term academic goals, to keep the children off the computer, out of your hair and to respect your work.

It took me over ten years, I think 13 to get my BA because I got married, became pregnant and dropped out in my third year, then after having two children returned to college—from UC Berkeley to Merritt College and Laney and Contra Costa and Las Positas, then Holy Names College. I took my kids to college with me after I got off work, and then on alternative weekends I went to school as well. It only took me two years to complete the BA once I got back into a four year college, but I could have had a Ph.D. if I’d stayed focused and stayed single. But I like my children, they are good company and my granddaughter is a nice kid as well and I have friends who don’t have kids and they are lonely, so I am happy for the choices I made—since I can’t reverse them.

My choices are reflected in the population who attend community college. This is one of the reasons why I wanted to teach at this level--the other has to do with my commitment to adult and family literacy, but I am getting tired. I am tired of adults who want a free ride, who don’t like to work or apply the necessary effort to master the skills necessary to be a proficient writer. I am tired of students who tell me how they got As in high school or in their last college writing course and the teachers they had who lied to them and gave them grades which reflected a competency the writer lacked. I am also tired of students who think they can write and don’t read, who want to participate without doing homework who are not serious and waste valuable time, mine and yours and their own.

I am honest. I do not believe in social promotion and though I do not grade on curves, sometimes students work hard but lack the skills necessary to pass the class the first go round.

This is not a reason to give up. If you know you are not well-prepared or have areas or gaps in your skills, get a tutor, another free service you can ascertain with that course offered through the LRC. Don’t wait until half the semester is over, get help now. I am not a tutor or an editor. If grammar is an issue, take a grammar course or get extra help. Stewart Pidd Hates English, one of our books will help you identify errors in a character’s writing assignments and then you will use this skill to address your own errors, however for some students, SPHE is not a refresher, it is the first time they have addressed these concepts and the short chapters might not be enough practice. This is not cause for shame, the shame is not being honest with oneself and failing when one could have succeeded if he or she had asked for assistance. We move along at a certain pace and often students mistakenly think SPHE is easy and let the work slip and then get behind and find catching up almost impossible.

I wish I didn’t have to use SPHE. Some students hate SPHE, but so many students do not know how to write an essay which doesn’t contain: confused words, subject verb agreement or pronoun agreement issues, MLA or works cited problems, oh and the big thing, plagiarizing; a lot of students plagiarize because they don’t know the difference between a free and literal paraphrase. SPHE addresses all of this in nonsense essays written by a nincompoop, Stewart Pidd, who hates English. You get to grade him and then justify his grade ‘cause he just might contest it.

For the English 1A class we are going to use Half the Sky Ale House collection of poetry 2009. The books will be in the college book store. You can pick up Half the Sky at any good book store, like the one on Park Street or in Shoreline Mall. You can borrow Half the Sky from a public library, if money is an issue. I plan to get a couple of copies of SPHE toput in the library and Writing Center. The first edition is there already. I think there are 2-3 in reference. Just ask for them.

The third book is your choice, start looking now for a book about a woman you admire. For English 201, the books are in the college bookstore. Oral Lee Brown has adopted entire classes and put children through college. Isabel Allende is a wonderful writer and philanthropist. Favianna Rodriguez is a fabulous artist who is one of the founders of East Side Arts Alliance. Angela Davis has done tremendous work to abolish the prison industrial complex. Diana Block is a wonderful activist for women's rights, board member of California Coalition for Women Prisoners, especially women inside and has a new book out, Arm the Spirit, about her activism work and subsequent imprisonment (Weather Underground), Halifu Osumare, scholar has written a book about hip hop as a global movement. She teaches at UC Davis and started Citidance in Oakland. Then there is Alice Walker, and Genny Lim and Avotcja, not to mention the filmmakers, educators, retired revolutionaries--just kidding, I don't think revolutionaries retire, like Kiilu Nyasha former Black Panther Party member and journalist, and Gail Shaw, MD, also a friend to the Party (Honkies for Huey).

For my English 201 folks, you will also have to read another book about or by woman you admire. The book can be fiction or nonfiction. It needs to be good literature though. If you need a suggestion let me know. I just remembered that I wanted to use a graphic novel, but maybe I’ll do this in the fall. So as it stands, the second book is your choice. Today is the first anniversary of President Obama’s term in office. I remember last January 20—the year seemed to have passed very quickly.

I hope none of you has family in Haiti, if so, I want to offer my condolences and hope for more efficient and speedy aid. People are suffering unnecessarily. Students who have taken my course before need to purchase, Diana Hacker’s Rules for Writers. Everyone needs a dictionary. Carry your dictionary and Hacker or SPHE to class daily. You also need Half the Sky. We will start the book immediately.

When the anniversary of the war, March 18-19 rolls around we will remember it with poetry which captures its bitter taste. I will give you handouts. We will read Lysistratra in the English 1A class, another handout (website). I encourage students to bring laptops to class. Hopefully we can go to a play or a film, a poetry reading, a lecture or an art show together. If you do any of these things and write about it, you can get extra credit.

For English 1A, SPHE is a refresher. I hope to breeze through it in six weeks once we start. We will also look at themes of love: agape, philia and eros as addressed by Martin Luther King Jr., in one of his speeches and then students will write an argument favoring one of the types of love over the others. Another notable occurrence this semester is the anniversary of the genocide in Rwanda.

For those students who have completed SPHE, I will have you work in groups, writing essays on other related topics, which students will then critique and analyze similar to the way Stewart Pidd’s essays were analyzed. I write for a newspaper (San Francisco Bay View) and have an Internet radio show, "Wanda's Picks," that broadcasts twice a week: Wednesday mornings, 6-7:30 AM and Fridays, 8-10 AM. I am here M-Th, not on Fridays. A good way to reach me is to call me. Call me after you have spoken to your classmate whose number you will get when we do our introductions next week. I don’t mind students calling me, but choose your moments wisely. I do not let others waste my time; it’s too valuable, more precious than gold. Sometimes people get their feelings hurt when I tell them so.


Textbook recap:

Stewart Pidd Hates English by Gary Politt and Craig Baker (both classes, those who haven’t already completed it)

Diana Hacker’s Rules for Writers (English 1A and English 201B if you have completed SPHE)


Half the Sky: Turning Oppression into Opportunity for Women Worldwide
by Nicholas D. Kristof and Sheryl WuDunn (both classes)

Alehouse Number 3 2009 “Poetry on Tap” (English 1A)

A college dictionary
A notebook
A folder for completed work
A stapler
Paperclips
Pencils and blue and black ink pens
A travel drive to save work on the computer

The class blog for English 201 is http://professorsabirsposse.blogspot.com

The class blog got English 1A is http://professorwandasposse.blogspot.com

My email address is: professorwandasposse@gmail.com (I have a peralta.edu account but I don’t check it regularly. My office number is (510) 748-2131. Don’t leave messages on the phone. Call me on my cell. I will give you the number in class.

Homework:

Respond to my letter on the blog. Tell me about yourself and your plans for this semester and how this fits into your overall plans for college and life. Don’t forget to tell me which section (time) your class meets and for English 201, whether you are in 201 A or 201 B, and what section for English 1A.

Monday, bring in a news article about something of interest to you (minimally 250 words). Read the article first. We are going to practice paraphrasing: literal paraphrasing and summarizing. For English 1A bring in a magazine length article—several pages. Read the article in advance.